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Aromatic Flowers

Within the blue sky floats petals Those from the most aromatic flowers Which I see colorfully before me A beautiful scene of serenity and hope A pleasant feeling befalls me here Like the first kiss from that special person Whom you have waited for all your life This field exudes this very emotion A peaceful glow from the Earth Through these wonderful proud flowers Their purpose could have just been found In my eyes, they are the epitome Of everything this universe loves
Russell Sivey Entered into Poet Destroyer A 's "free verse poem. (15 max lines)" contest 3/12/2013

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Date: 3/20/2013 10:47:00 AM
Aromatically and wonderfully written poem friend Russell...Congratulations on your win in PD's contest. Cheers!! :) Love,Maria
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Date: 3/20/2013 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Russell ...great job...Donna.
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Date: 3/20/2013 4:48:00 AM
A wonderful write Russell. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/19/2013 8:50:00 AM
so beautiful, Russell! Congratulations on this wonderful poem!!
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Date: 3/18/2013 8:57:00 PM
Russell this is so pretty!
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Date: 3/18/2013 6:43:00 PM
Russell Congratulations :-) with your nice and wonderful winning free verse poem~ Always & Forever* PD
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Date: 3/14/2013 9:41:00 AM
Very nice poem. Beautiful descriptions. Certainly very alive and colourful.
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Date: 3/12/2013 6:03:00 PM
Very descriptive but yet maybe metaphoric work..Not sure..Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by..I only see Robins here in the early spring and it us usually all males then again sometimes in the fall just before winter...I always thought that they were migratory and just came through like the geese but a close aqaintance sent me an email where one had nested on her porch in a hanging flower pot.I would think as large as they are .Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2013 6:04:00 PM
they would be messy if they came to one's porch or close to the house to nest and eat from feeders..Thanks again for your visits..Sara
Date: 3/12/2013 4:26:00 PM
Wow !! This is beautiful !! Love how you finished it... wonderful way to look at nature's beauty !! Inhale !!!
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Date: 3/12/2013 4:21:00 PM
Just beautiful Russell...so peaceful...good luck in the contest.
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