Armageddon

You are our neighbors We are your neighbors and we hate you You do not belong here You are different than us We don't just want you to leave We want to kill you We want to eradicate you We will attack you When you retaliate we will crumple to our knees and cry to the world Look at our neighbor! Our neighbor is trying to kill us! Then the world will rush to our aid because the world fears us. The world fears what we might become You must learn to fear us.

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Skat A

Date: 2/22/2013 6:02:00 PM

this is a good poem TimSKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 9:00:00 AM

Good morning Tim, :-) Congratulations in Debbie's fine " EIGHT Lines any KIND " contest. enjoy your day... PD

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/14/2013 2:14:00 PM

This is a very power write. Congratulations on thr win. I say that at the end everything will be alright and if it's not - it's because it is not the end yet. Have a blessed day. Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2013 3:43:00 AM

Armageddon starts in our heart and then pours out to implicate the whole world. Good writing! Powerfully well expressed! Thank you

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/13/2013 9:29:00 PM

A strong message, thats for sure,Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/13/2013 7:43:00 PM

Tim, wow..I'm your neighbor.. wow~ Global Warming will come with or without a Warning. we are the killers~~~ Okay, Tim, I know this Armageddon you are talking about. I wish not to meet this fearful COME. good verse. love~PD

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/13/2013 7:41:00 PM

nice win on a subject people feel strongly on. have a blessed day ;}

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/13/2013 2:41:00 PM

An excellent verse Tim. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 1/13/2013 11:02:00 AM

Tim, congrats on your Hm, loved this first time around...David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2013 4:36:00 AM

Congrats on your HM Tim xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/12/2013 8:42:00 PM

Strong words and views, but oh so truthful....Seren

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/11/2013 9:35:00 PM

Wow Tim, and all you say here is so true. I've been dumbstruck reading things about the new world order and racial hatred is one of the things in place and encouraged by these people to keep our minds busy. You should check it out, I was dumbfounded. This describes exactly what the agenda is. Wow!

Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 1/11/2013 9:37:00 PM

2 wow's make me wish I had reread before posting *_*

Thvia Shetley

Date: 1/11/2013 3:02:00 PM

sadly, this is the state of things... expressed nicely my friend. Not sure why we never bumped into each other either but certainly happy we have now!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2013 7:30:00 PM

wow. STRONG stuff and so scary it is. Can't believe I have not seen any of your poetry since about four days ago!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/10/2013 12:04:00 PM

Powerful and provoking poem!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/9/2013 9:26:00 PM

Its all about power..bullying..ruling..attacking then playing the viictim.Its all about fear..anger.greed..Its all about pain.Powerful words indeed Tim

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/8/2013 12:33:00 PM

The way that Canada has treated First Nations people is our dirty secret.. disgusting, horrible. Right now, one of the chiefs has just ended a hunger strike at our Nation's capital. All to have a meeting with our PM. First Nation peoples are living in horrible conditions. We are failing as a society by turning our backs on those who were here first... and deserve apologies and restitution... hugs to you Tim. Happy new Year!

Kathryn Collins

Date: 1/7/2013 8:04:00 AM

Dear Tim - This is a remarkable piece. Universal - too bad. love, Kathy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/6/2013 2:07:00 PM

Nice work cher, really nice work..I enjoyed tremendously being priveledged to see the deeper side of you. [Re: Staw Men..I too read all those books of course and was mightily impressed by Stranger in a Strange Land, 1984 & Brave New World..and BIG Brother certainly IS watching us aye?] Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 1/5/2013 11:46:00 AM

thoughtful and thought provoking write here, my friend - Credo is wonderful : )

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2013 9:44:00 AM

Too true..........such a sad commentary of how the world works. You said it well!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/4/2013 3:31:00 PM

very wise and perceptive...

David Williams

Date: 1/4/2013 9:13:00 AM

wow Tim, very strong, good luck..David