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Apples are delicious
and crunchy too.
When you drop it
on the ground
It rolls around
and then it gets
all bruised
It makes me happy
when they are 
so shiny and brand

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  1. Date: 6/2/2009 4:39:00 PM
    a good start. jhl

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 6:56:00 PM
    OOO great description of apples. Sweet poem! -Alley

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 5:43:00 PM
    Made me smile.....great write -Jessica

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 5:20:00 PM
    Very good Shianna, apples are indeed delicious, another lovely poem, James

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 2:36:00 PM
    Know bright one see for fun if you can make he verse in the shape of an apple! I bet you can!! I know you can! Light & Love & welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 9:09:00 AM
    Shi-I think you did a wonderful job on your first writings. This one is my favorite. Great job & keep writing! I love you. You make mommy proud! Love Always, Mom