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Apples

Apples are delicious and crunchy too. When you drop it on the ground It rolls around and then it gets all bruised It makes me happy when they are so shiny and brand new.

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Date: 6/2/2009 4:39:00 PM
a good start. jhl
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Date: 5/29/2009 6:56:00 PM
OOO great description of apples. Sweet poem! -Alley
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:43:00 PM
Made me smile.....great write -Jessica
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:20:00 PM
Very good Shianna, apples are indeed delicious, another lovely poem, James
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Date: 5/28/2009 2:36:00 PM
Know bright one see for fun if you can make he verse in the shape of an apple! I bet you can!! I know you can! Light & Love & welcome to the soup
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Date: 5/28/2009 9:09:00 AM
Shi-I think you did a wonderful job on your first writings. This one is my favorite. Great job & keep writing! I love you. You make mommy proud! Love Always, Mom
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