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Anticipation

anticipation little ones listen for sleigh bells... the smell of fir boughs Christmas Eve

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/21/2010 4:25:00 PM

My Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Win in Light and LOVE : Deborah's Contest I like the little Girl in YOU LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR LOVING Liege...HG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2010 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara in Deborah's contest Holiday Haiku. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/15/2010 8:01:00 AM

lovely , congrats on your winin the contest

John Freeman

Date: 11/14/2010 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your beautiful poem of little one's awe of wonder. Agaape, Moses

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/13/2010 12:50:00 AM

love your gorgeous ku, BG.. cheers on your win too! hugggs.. warmest, nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/12/2010 7:16:00 PM

A beautiful haiku Barbara. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2010 4:44:00 PM

Smells like Xmas, Barbara, a very very nice one! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/12/2010 11:24:00 AM

My congratulations to you, BG on your win in Deb's Contest. Love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/12/2010 9:42:00 AM

Big congrats to my favorite LNC!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/12/2010 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserv ed win, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2010 8:11:00 AM

Congrats BG on your big win in the Haiku contest with this wonderful piece on Christmas luv.. such a visual picture for all to read.. enjoy with luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2010 5:46:00 PM

Barb please get the word "anticipation" down into the body of the poem too....I can't rank it this way hon. Please hurry ;)

Constance La France

Date: 11/3/2010 5:58:00 PM

nice image penned in this haiku, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for you commnets on my poetry~~

Daver Austin

Date: 11/3/2010 2:26:00 PM

Christmas Eve by the tree. A wonderfrul image and sensation. Love, Dave

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/3/2010 12:19:00 PM

Luv it BG ...good luck in the contest.. most chose Christmas for their Haiku but yours is something special luv.. enjoyed..today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/3/2010 10:45:00 AM

Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Barbara. Love, Carol

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/2/2010 8:18:00 PM

Opps, I forgot to thank you for your comments on my three haikus' I am new at writing them. And new at commenting here.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/2/2010 8:13:00 PM

Christmas is indeed coming. this poem is a great reminder. I just wish it would get cold enough for Christmas. With the a/c on it is hard to think of sleigh betts.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/2/2010 4:00:00 PM

Oh my gosh, don't remind us so soon . Our snow is finally melting and the icy roads are now bare. A wonderful Haiku in anticipation of the Christmas season. God Bless Phyl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/2/2010 1:36:00 PM

Apt picture you have penned of the anticipation of Christmas eve, Barbara