Get Your Premium Membership

Another Day Is Dawning

Another day is dawning The morning sun does slowly rise A lighthouse stands at ease Its silhouette of nights untold A’ watch on velvet seas A silent beach in glistened glow Bids farewell to the tide I walk this lonely stretch of sand My thoughts collect inside Counting steps, the marks they leave Of places I have been Past weathered dunes along the way Till I’m with you again As crimson paints horizon’s fire In shades of tinted hue Another day is dawning as I only think of you Good morning Soupers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/19/2017 3:03:00 PM
A very visual scene you paint Chris
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 3:10:00 PM
Thanks so very much Tim. I appreciate your kindness
Date: 1/19/2017 1:55:00 PM
You've definitely mastered the art of imagery usage. Beautiful poem that leads the reader with a smile and inspiration. The last line makes me wish my husband wasn't at work so I could kiss him.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 2:02:00 PM
Text him a kiss...I'm sure he would like that. :) Thanks Christy, your comments always leave me with a smile.
Date: 1/19/2017 12:02:00 PM
- No one can leave this poem without a good feeling in the stomach and smile on your lips :) - Good morning hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise. I am so happy you liked this one this morning.
Date: 1/19/2017 11:47:00 AM
I love 5 minutes walk from a beach - I do so love 'waking up' with your Chris your imagery is so wonderful:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I always smile when you come walking by my poetry.
Date: 1/19/2017 9:01:00 AM
Precious solitude of a beach walk at sunrise, no better perspective...
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 1/19/2017 8:53:00 AM
Good Morning,So Beautiful Chris.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:27:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine. Thank you so very much my sweet friend for always being so nice to me.
Date: 1/19/2017 7:51:00 AM
Very nice Chris!
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:26:00 AM
Good morning Heidi. Thank you my sweet friend.
Date: 1/19/2017 7:48:00 AM
What a joyous awakening have you prepared for us dear, Chris! Certainly your poem has infused with great anticipation the day! A seven!
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your kind thoughts this day. Good morning my friend.
Date: 1/19/2017 6:36:00 AM
Good morning Chris, It's always a joy to wake up to read your lovely "morning" poems. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/19/2017 9:23:00 AM
Good morning Alexis. Thank you my sweet friend for always being so kind to me.
Date: 1/19/2017 6:19:00 AM
Lovely dawning along with 'you' ...
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs