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Angels and the Rain

Once upon a time, the angels, Having witnessed the predicaments of Man, So moved were that their fluffy wings together joined Overcasting the whole sky, and started crying For Humanity’s wounds to cleanse wished and Alleviate its pain Since then Each time a prayer the angels hear, asking them The aches of humanity to ease, their tears let fall upon Earth, as RAIN! © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 FEBRUARY 2015 NOTE: (For what it worth) The above story is not a repetition of a story told by someone else but a story I was inspired to create!

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Date: 3/5/2015 3:15:00 PM
You process a poetic soul that breathes magic into your words. Emile. #7
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/6/2015 7:37:00 AM
Your comments, always a poetic experience, dear Emile! Thank you!
Date: 2/28/2015 7:22:00 AM
After reading your poem, I can think of no better reason to walk in the rain.
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:26:00 AM
Such a wonderful comment, my friend, Richard!
Date: 2/27/2015 3:34:00 PM
I now look forward to the rain . . . Whenever showers come, I will remember this poem. 7
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Date: 2/28/2015 6:16:00 AM
...and I will be thinking of you, thinking about this poem, dear David! Thank you so much for your kindness and generosity!
Date: 2/27/2015 3:09:00 PM
Wow!! The imagery you have left in my mind of the angels weeping. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 2/27/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thank you dearest, Eve, for your beautiful comment! I appreciate it. God bless you!
Date: 2/27/2015 7:10:00 AM
- Beautiful and touching, dear Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2015 2:39:00 PM
It is wonderful to receive your visit and comment my dear friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs!
Date: 2/27/2015 3:15:00 AM
Beautiful....cleansing rain of angels...How sweet. Bless you, my dear poet.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/27/2015 2:37:00 PM
Eileen, my dearest , thank you for your gracious visit and comment! Bless you too!

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