Angella

O’er this land I roam Eternally through sorrow Escaping thy ‘morrow Seeking thine home Pocketed tools, head hung low Stones kicked roll swift They flee thee as on I go, bereft Woeful and yes full brimmed regret Tears nay neither sweat nor dew I would shed existence for you

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/16/2014 5:08:00 AM

Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, ryan

Skat A

Date: 3/16/2014 4:19:00 AM

Ryan:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 4:02:00 AM

Ryan, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/3/2011 6:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Ryan. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/24/2011 8:23:00 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ryan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2011 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this weekRyan . Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 4/8/2011 3:54:00 AM

The last line is so - so POWERFUL, Angella. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 4/7/2011 9:09:00 AM

Congratulations Ryne on your honored 2 success. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/6/2011 8:12:00 PM

Another great poem of passionate sorrow. You won with full honors for this one! Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/6/2011 5:12:00 PM

phew "shed existance for you" powerful stuff here! Congrad's on your big win and I wish better for you too! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/6/2011 1:11:00 PM

cheers for the super fine win, ryan.. :) huggs, nette

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/6/2011 12:52:00 PM

wow..that last line is so powerful!! Congratulations, Ryan!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2011 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Ryan. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/6/2011 9:49:00 AM

congrats on your win in Drake's contest with this wonderful entry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/6/2011 8:21:00 AM

Wow! Beautiful, heartfelt poem, Ryan. So much longing. Congratulations on taking second place in Drake's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

Ryan Wegenast

Date: 4/6/2011 5:46:00 AM

Thanks everyone!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2011 5:45:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Drake, Ryan

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/6/2011 4:57:00 AM

Congrats with earning 2nd place in my contest with this piece. The last line bowled me over.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/6/2011 4:57:00 AM

Congrats Ryan on your 2nd place win in Drake's cool contest with this exciting and excellent entry luv.. enjoy your top ten sweet success with luv..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/3/2011 4:20:00 PM

This poem sound like one that would be written in earlier times. Wonderful write. God Bless Phyl

Virginia Frayer

Date: 3/1/2011 9:03:00 PM

Wow and you said mine was beautiful...very nice write Ryan, best wishes ~Virginia

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/28/2011 1:45:00 PM

Ryan, This has the feel of a poem from another time, perhaps 19th though might be earlier! Such a wonderful read:) Thanks for the comment on "Star Gazing", so appreciated:) Carol

Date: 2/28/2011 6:18:00 AM

Beautiful poem to someone special, enjoyed.

Date: 2/28/2011 2:15:00 AM

...a nice little love poem :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/27/2011 8:38:00 PM

Ok, where was this poem on Valentine's Day? You did a great job describing your attire as you venture off to find the "one you desire"-