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And you don't know me

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And you don't know me

Your petrified smiles face the sun
mirror on the paths we walked,
amid ferns
and flowers without a name.

(Next year you will depart to encounter my dreams.)

The crags whiten from counting time.

You were approaching from afar
I did not see any glass screens between us,
- I know, you were a dreamy form,
floating in Pelago, my tiredness and the sun,
excessive on the eyelids, please lower,
I need to talk to you.

Small silences, small silences that shine
all of my hands baptized me
you offered them a name like an omen,
I shaped you,
you called me Angel.

When the downpour started, you vanished
betimes was morning
Inside the rainfalls you attempt to address me,
and I recall you
you come closer but you don't know it
and I don't see it, and you don't know me.

© G.V. 03-16-2013

Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
Contest Name: free verse
Placement: 2nd

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  1. Date: 4/23/2014 3:58:00 AM
    When I read your poems, I feel I live in them,, in those lines and words.. Giorgio!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:50:00 AM
    This is a deep and diverse write that leads the reader in many different directions. Like very much! Big congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 6/2/2013 11:31:00 AM
    What a wonderful free verse . I was lost in the beautiful phrasing floating in your dream. Congratulations on this fine wining poem. Love, SuZ

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:09:00 PM
    CONGRATS!!! love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Hi Giorgio, Congratulations on your sweet awesome free verse win.... you poem rocks... :-) Linda

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 3:53:00 AM
    Many Congratulations Giorgio xx

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 8:51:00 AM
    Good morning, Giorgio...... wow! I wonder to whom you are referring to. Is it the light that does not know yo? in the poem, i seem to follow the warm feeling and then forgotten. I know I am wrong... However, I'm amazed by encounter. xox~ Linda