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An Ordinary Day

The world has not be kind I see it in your eyes In that tired smile In the way you take off your jacket And sit to rest a while I hear that sigh I sympathize with my smile I let you close your eyes For just a little while And cover you with a favorite blanket To let you rest A half hour passes With you in dreamland I stand before you My hair in a pony tail Shower fresh Smelling sweet My lips cherry glossed I let the towel drop I bend down to kiss you I let my lips linger Till you’ve had a taste Your eyes flutter open I see that smile of pleasure Waking on your lips And you pull me onto your lap "Come here, honey child" I lean back as my hands guide Your head to my chest Whispering in your ear... “Baby Boy…. Food’s gone cold… Do you want to start with dessert?” Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/22/2014 8:36:00 PM
I like the detail in this poem, things such as the jacket; they add a homey and realistic feel to poetry, while also giving so many things to imagine all throughout the poem. Awesome!
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:31:00 PM
Oh the thoughts that go through my head!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/21/2014 3:16:00 AM
Robert... :) I presume those are happy and sweet? Thank you for the visit. I was happy to take a walk with you through your last poem. I have much to learn from you. You are a talented poet, indeed.
Date: 8/20/2014 1:19:00 PM
Soft dreams and sweet blessings. Xool imtimacy Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 4:36:00 PM
:) soft and sweet....lovely, Justin...Wish that all life would be that way. Hugs to you...
Date: 8/20/2014 8:44:00 AM
Just perfect Eileen ! Not a bad idea to start wid dessert ! Wonderful write my friend ,, loved it !
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 4:36:00 PM
Dr Umpa...I'm always ready for desert! ;)
Date: 8/20/2014 7:41:00 AM
My favorite kind of surprise. This is just perfect!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 4:37:00 PM
Isn't it, though? ;) I know I'd love that sort of surprise
Date: 8/20/2014 6:25:00 AM
This is lovely Eileen. Love the way how you move on from the first to the second part of the poem. You understand your man, giving him space and rest and, eventually, satisfaction. Teasing third part...but you already know the answer. [wonder what a special day is like:)] // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 7:34:00 AM
I love to please and tease when I can, Paul. It is in my nature. A special day? I will leave that for my next daydream....Hugs
Date: 8/20/2014 5:30:00 AM
Eternal adolescent you are dear Eileen, with a child's beautiful heart, offering joy to troubled by reality men! A happy well-written serious poem!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 5:33:00 AM
Exies Dhekio, Demetri mou. Emai san ena koretzaki...Ah...toso poli thelo na miliso Ellenika....Kalos Erthes...Mou aresee to xamogela sou sten avatar. Efkharisto...Me agape panta. E Mykrouli
Date: 8/20/2014 5:23:00 AM
Dear Eileen, this is a gem. I like the way you describe every aspect of an ordinary day, but end with a provocative line. Mornings always start best with dessert! It's so nice to get to know you through your poetry. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 5:26:00 AM
Carolyn...thank you for your visit. You are very sweet and kind. I know you are an author and have that dream already fulfilled. I'm so happy for you....I live and dream.....about so many things. It keeps me going. The pleasure is all mine! (getting to know you!)
Date: 8/20/2014 12:20:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Thank you. Happy writing and God bless you.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 3:03:00 AM
Thanks, Regina. Within the right frame work, sensuality is to be celebrated.
Date: 8/19/2014 11:40:00 PM
Very pleasant awakening Eileen.... Wouldn't no when one dream ended and the next one started....hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 3:02:00 AM
Tim, it's the best way to wake up from a dream...sweet and yummy! Hugs, my dear.

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