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An Ode To An Insidious Sensation

Beneath the translucent veil of placidity, emerged that sound To all is pure evil forecasting the prelude of a prolonged agony Of flashy tear drops falling from a man abandoning his captaincy A voice gushing through blood to veins in a body utterly bound With the zeal of a new couples tasting a love heartily profound Never imagining their pampered sparkle would ever reach atrophy A persisting whisper like the howls of a one thousand wolfhound Driven by lust, the fervent fervour fatuously never faltered my heart Desire has simply dyed my insidious sensation with colours agleam With ease, the prey has fitly fallen into web not using a single dart Night wiped the eyes of conscience, sanity swept in a sea of steam For sweet sin never countenances evildoers to venerate the extreme Bed saved its sheets for passers-by to err, the game began to start! © Guru Jad 2013

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Date: 5/3/2013 5:15:00 PM
Hello Guru Jad - So much poetic expression to feast on, I read your poem multiple times. The phrasing that really is stuck in my mind is "A voice gushing through blood to veins..." Thanks for stopping by my poem! - Gail
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Guru Jad
Date: 5/19/2013 4:31:00 PM
Gail, very glad you have liked this piece. Thank you a lot for passing by. Your attendance means a great deal to me. XOXO
Date: 4/29/2013 5:53:00 AM
I read your poem through twice, simply feasting on your eloquence. Your rhyming and clever use of alliteration appeal. Deep writing, Guru. Nice one. :)
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Guru Jad
Date: 4/29/2013 10:33:00 AM
Delysia Hendricks, it is such an honour to have you hear.. Thank you for this precious visit and I am highly happy with your comment. All the best XoXo
Date: 4/26/2013 7:18:00 AM
keep on keeping on an write it all down!
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Guru Jad
Date: 4/26/2013 8:43:00 PM
Michael,,, thank you for this encouragement,, I shall do as you say! Cheerio!
Date: 3/6/2013 6:17:00 AM
Dear Guru, Your poem a banquet of English language displayed before my hungry eyes! Thank you for your comment!
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/6/2013 5:48:00 PM
Mr. Trifiatis, I am glad that my simple words have captured your eyes. Thank you for stopping by. Wish you the best!!
Date: 3/5/2013 5:32:00 AM
Good morning my friend, I hope this day finds you well.
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Date: 3/6/2013 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Jad
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/5/2013 6:27:00 AM
Good morning dear friend.. Your wish echoes with mine to you! May you always find joy, health, and whatever you desire in your way!
Date: 3/4/2013 2:14:00 AM
very nice poem Guru..deep indeed..i like the alliteration 'fervent' 'fervour'...
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/5/2013 6:26:00 AM
Shan Jehan... I thank you deeply for your visit and your comment. Glad you have liked it!! Have a great day!
Date: 3/3/2013 10:07:00 PM
You are not a poor writer as is evidenced by your poems and creative comments for other writers work. In your short time here you have already impacted those you have come in contact with.
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/5/2013 6:25:00 AM
My dear friend Richard, this is the most honouring Certificate I can have from a person like you!! I am very elated by your words!!! Heartily, thank you!
Date: 3/3/2013 6:15:00 PM
There is such a deep sense of truth in every line here..even if most of us don't like to say it out loud..great poem
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Date: 3/5/2013 6:23:00 AM
Donna,, I agree with you... Sometimes we set certain taboos in our lives and it would need a great strength to cross them - regardless the fact that they may be wrong in the first place!! Thank you, Donna... All the best!
Date: 3/3/2013 10:28:00 AM
Good morning Guru, insanity I sense, but to endure this is a way that would make evil win which when called upon or brought upon waits for the giving in within the prey, i really got into this poem i picture a troubled person fighting the evil, best poem I've read today,.. XOXO Linda
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/5/2013 6:21:00 AM
Good Morning Linda.... Yes indeed.. there is a bunch of feelings here: ranging from lust to madness!! Evil is evident.. if we just admit this, we have conquered half the battle!! ---- Thank you for your superb comment!!
Date: 3/3/2013 7:16:00 AM
Guru this is an excellent piece of work...David
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/5/2013 6:19:00 AM
David... Thank you a load! Have a great day!
Date: 3/3/2013 5:36:00 AM
You amaze me with every poem you write. You have a unique talent with an exquisite grasp of poetic phrases not often seen. I applaud you my good friend! Good wishes for a great fun filled day, Jack
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Date: 3/5/2013 6:18:00 AM
Sir, you have just sprinkled a shower of joy upon me!! I am the happiest lad after your generous comment!!!
Date: 3/2/2013 10:36:00 PM
You have a very unique use of language that has a way of grabbing my attention. It was a treat to find your new poem.
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/3/2013 3:47:00 AM
Dear Richard, Your opinion of my poor writing is most encouraging. I am sincerely glad for your presence and your comment!
Date: 3/2/2013 9:54:00 PM
Your use of alliteration is charming...sanity swept in a sea of steam....You're use of vocabulary is what has made this poem so interesting....that plus the hint of a person driven beyond reason...You have spun quite a web. ;)
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Date: 3/3/2013 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Eileen! I love the use of figurative speech when they are needed to convey a certain message - or what I call: a second message :)... Have a great day my dear!

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