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An Early Mother's Day

I had much to accomplish last Saturday, But far too many things got in my way: As always when awaking, I took a pee, then went to see the emails piled up for me. I stayed so long, missed boxing class, so then, I grabbed some food and went downstairs again! Decided I’d swim laps at 12 instead. Felt tired, so I lay down on my bed. Put the TV on; dozed off. Oh my! Woke up at noon, so skipped the swim (sigh!) Told myself I’d later use the gym. Then called my hubbie - talked a bit to him. Called a sister too and talked forever. Thought about the gym. I’d get there never! Decided to do lesson plans and got my book. Went to the computer, but at Soup I took a look! Saw some blogs and got involved in those. Got up to pet the dog and blow my nose. Remembered I had vacuuming to do But had to write a poem that was brand new. Decided that the vacuuming could wait. Took a bath and readied for my mother/daughter date. Put on better clothes and got to thinking lesson plans and gym were off (my heart was sinking). Happy nonetheless, I drove my car. Went to my sweet daughter’s house; it’s not too far. Drove an hour more in pouring rain just to eat at Maid-rites once again! Satisfied and chatting, headed south. Taste of Maid-rites lingered in my mouth. Arrived in Sandy for a film called Child 44. Resisted smell of popcorn and the urge to eat once more. Got home late. The dog was filled with glee. I let him in the house as he jumped all over me. My lovely weekend’s nearly gone. What fun. . . when vacuuming and lesson plans are still not done! (A list poem written for Sara Kendrick's "What I Accomplished Today" Poetry contest on the following day, Mother’s Day,when I actually finally did the vacuuming and my lesson plans! Nothing like putting things off till the last minute!)

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Date: 8/7/2015 10:07:00 AM
Just sometimes things can wait.Read this one before and a fine poem it is. love phyl
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Date: 6/7/2015 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations! I really like the way you did this. Such fun
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Date: 5/28/2015 5:57:00 PM
Andrea, oh this is delightful, your days seem a lot like mine, I mean well but so distracted and if I get on the soup, I am done, congratulations on your wonderful win with this beauty and thanks so much for visiting my poem, I have a story to tell, that poem is so meaningful to me, I am happy that it placed well in not one contest but two!!!
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:38:00 PM
Andrea:) Congratulations, on your sweet win. Love LINDA
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Date: 5/22/2015 10:38:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Andrea:)
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Date: 5/22/2015 8:39:00 AM
Unique entry..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/21/2015 8:21:00 PM
I have many days where I have a list of things I want to accomplish in a day, only to get sidetracked by things like poetry soup, facebook and reading a good book. Enjoyed your poem, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/21/2015 6:47:00 PM
Andrea, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/21/2015 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, to a very busy day. Hugs eve
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Date: 5/21/2015 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on top win. Loved this list.
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Date: 5/21/2015 12:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/18/2015 2:26:00 AM
G'day Andrea... sounds like one of my days Andrea. I live by the motto 'why do today what can be left for tomorrow' - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:32:00 PM
A beautiful list. Very expressive. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 5/17/2015 1:58:00 PM
yeow..I like those unaccomplished goals especially when all we need to do is relax.. a lively, superb artpiece, andie.. huggs
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Date: 5/17/2015 12:43:00 PM
Hey there! Hope you made the winners circle.... It's great to be back online. I'm posting new material occasionally now. My Mothers Day offering was "Let Me Be Your Friend"... I think I posted it earlier... Still Love Ya Much...... Jake
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:14:00 AM
Andrea, I am doing good thanks and you?
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Date: 5/17/2015 9:37:00 AM
Hectic day Andrea, even if you didn't get everything done, you sure did loads of other stuff ;) all the best for the contest busy lady ;) luv Wilma
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:31:00 PM
I do not do lesson plans - although my late father always did. I found this to be an enjoyable read! I sent more poems to the NY Times - I was glad to have a poem in there as it is a prestigious paper. Why not hire a housekeeper? That is what I do! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:38:00 PM
oh matt, you make me laugh. I can't even afford health insurance. My school does not give it and it's much too expensive for me to afford it. I surely can't hire a housekeeper!!
Date: 5/16/2015 6:00:00 PM
lol sounds frenzied Andrea never put off what you can do today is most mother's laments hugs gl in contest 7
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Date: 5/16/2015 12:42:00 PM
Well done, a typical day mixed with a little humor has been captured by your artistic pen and held motionless on the page. Emile.
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:40:00 AM
Oh, I see that you did do the housework from the note below. You are so funny.
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:38:00 AM
Fun knowing that this really happened and you can make a poem out of your life. Eating Maid-rites makes me jealous and those that have never had this deliciousness are missing out. The cheese-rites so good and a tenderloin, no one knows what you are even talking about. Great job sis on the poem not on not doing the housework.
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:14:00 AM
You accomplished a lot without doing what was on the agenda! Not bad:) Of course, you're not the only one like this; eventually most things get done. // paul
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:56:00 AM
"Getting to know you, getting to know all about you." From The King and I, right? I love the song and I love knowing you. Love, daver
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:28:00 AM
Charming and fun read, Andie. It was actually a nice day...haha. You got to do something for yourself, which is a rare case for moms! Loved it. GL in the contest. 7. Kim
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