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Below is the poem entitled ALONE which was written by poet Jade Celeste. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I go to bed alone; I wake up alone
I eat all my meals in silence
Not another soul at home

I laugh alone; I cry alone
I wonder through these rooms
Imprisoned in my home

I dream alone; I scream alone
I reach out for an embrace
In this bedroom of my home

Alone, alone; I’m tired of being alone
While you travel far from home

Now you sleep beside me, yet I feel so all alone
For in your obliged embrace
My heart is dying....all alone.

For Black Eyed Susan's Loneliness Contest

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 3:55:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Eileen....xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:22:00 AM
    Yes, a person can be alone or lonely in a room full of people..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 3:37:00 AM
    Thank you for your kind comments, Danesh, Sandra, and Debbie....I'm sorry I haven't replied personally. I'm out of an internet line at home...At the office now... :) I appreciate your thoughts on this piece...We all get lonely sometimes....don't we? ;) To all who WILL post after reading my piece...know that I am grateful for your visit. This was a longer piece but I had to reduce it to meet with the specifications of the contest. HUGS to one and all!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 6:57:00 PM
    wow! what a poetic statement! Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:45:00 PM
    the worst loneliness is where someone is near, yet you still feel along...good poem, congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Been there done that got the divorce ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 3:14:00 PM
    Eileen congrats on win with a beautiful poem Shadow x smile

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/17/2013 3:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, my dear Shadow! :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 2:24:00 PM
    I love it, Eileen. A well deserved win indeed. Congratulations.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/17/2013 2:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea!!! Thank you! This boosts my confidence! :) Hugs!
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:41:00 AM
    This is such a heart-breaking that so many people may relate to....even if not willing to admit. Great piece, Eileen !! (PS........I listened to your beautiful reading on Drake's show did such a wonderful job .....and you have the most lovely voice !! So nice to hear you! Congratulations on both this poem, and your debut !!! :)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/17/2013 2:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    REALLY? YOU LIKED IT! :) Thanks so much, Carrie! That means an awful lot to me! You are very sweet....Yes....I am a bit too needy, perhaps that is part of the truth of this poem....
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Congrats on your poem winning in the contest, Eileen

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/17/2013 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Dr Ram. Glad you came to visit! :)
  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:51:00 AM
    I used to have to travel for work, this helps me understand what my wife must have felt. It was also hard on me.Congratulations on your win.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/17/2013 2:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard....I thought maybe this one might have a chance. Unfortunately, I had to edit some of it because it was post the 12 line mark. That hurt, cause I had some important lines there. At least it got some exposure. It was an older write....Thanks for the visit and sharing part of your life with me.
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 4:37:00 PM
    Its hard not to take it personally when jobs take loved ones on the road....I know....I think it is hard for them too though....good luck with this situation...I ended up traveling four years with my husband! Blessings

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 9/17/2013 2:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! That must have been nice! :) It's better now. He travels less...I do miss him so when he's gone! Thanks for the post my sweet!
  1. Date: 2/28/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 2/28/2013 7:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry