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Allure of Your Love

Sure there’s love in splendor of budding rose And scent of fragrance in garden of spring And banks of meadows where the river flows-- Where soft winds whisper and the Blue Jays sing, When you appear in the sight of full moon Cuddling my heart in embrace of romance Evoking plum desires as heartbeats croon Enamored in trance of your loving glance, Seeing my smile in allure of your eyes Mesmerized by thrill of enchanting glee As you come closer beneath starry skies Showing me coyly how dreams answer plea, When hymn of your soul lets the music play As intimate rhythms seductive hearts sway. November 25, 2019 I want to fall in love with a sonnet poetry contest Sponsor: Melani Udaeta Placed 2nd: Your best sonnet July to December 2019 Sponsor: John Hamilton Placed 3rd: Strand special 6 by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/6/2020 6:41:00 PM

Another beautiful love poem, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/21/2019 4:32:00 AM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Sir Brian's contest, Vijay - best wishes and blessings to you and yours for a Merry Christmas! Keep up the great work, my friend! :o)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2019 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Greg--much appreciate. Merry Christmas to you as well.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/21/2019 4:24:00 AM

Congrats on your win!;)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2019 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Brenda--much appreciate.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/16/2019 5:31:00 PM

A wonderful sonnet Vijay, I remembered how much I loved it. Congrats on a second place win!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/24/2019 7:44:00 AM

Much appreciate John--many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/13/2019 2:28:00 AM

This is a masterpiece Vijay! It is sure to be a top winner. Love laced thru every verse. : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2019 7:46:00 AM

Much appreciate the vote of confidence, Connie--many thanks.

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/29/2019 7:24:00 PM

Nice use of form! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/30/2019 5:05:00 PM

Much appreciate Matthew--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/29/2019 3:57:00 AM

Sweetly romantic!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2019 7:48:00 AM

Many thanks Kim--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2019 8:05:00 PM

very romantic and I think exactly what the sponsor of that challenge was looking for!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2019 7:48:00 AM

So kind of you Andrea--much appreciate your valued comments--many thanks.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2019 6:31:00 PM

where soft winds whisper beautifully painted piece wishing you a blessed weekend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2019 7:47:00 AM

Thank you for the kind remarks, Liam--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/28/2019 1:28:00 PM

- A wonderful sonnet, Vijay .... no one can avoid two falls in love with this - Best winner wishes for you, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2019 7:47:00 AM

So true--much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2019 1:05:00 PM

The lats two line are so sentimental my friend Vijay, they touched me to my very core! Really well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/29/2019 7:46:00 AM

Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks my friend.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 11/27/2019 9:01:00 PM

Very amazing sonnet, Romance and love both are well depicted.Liked it................Hugs//Manmath//

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2019 7:22:00 AM

Much appreciate, Manmath--many thanks.

Hello There

Date: 11/27/2019 7:00:00 PM

A tenderly seductive piece, Vijay. Innocent, yet mesmerizingly passionate and warm ~ alluring, as your title suggests, is the perfect term...a fav.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/28/2019 7:21:00 AM

Delighted by your feedback my friend--much appreciate HT--many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Silent One

Date: 11/27/2019 1:19:00 PM

One of the most romantic sonnets I have read.. sounds like perfect love with great rhyme and flow..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/27/2019 3:19:00 PM

Thank you Silent One--much appreciate your valued comments.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/26/2019 6:26:00 PM

I don't know about the rules of this contest, but I think you won it, you sonneteered it beautifully, how can a heart resist.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/27/2019 7:58:00 AM

Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Pixie--many thanks my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 11/26/2019 9:53:00 AM

No need for luck in the contest...this beauty is a winner, sweet writing, beautiful sonnet Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:09:00 AM

So glad to read your words of confidence, John--appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks for your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/26/2019 8:19:00 AM

Another lovely romantic poem set in nature, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Janice for your visit and comments--much appreciate the kind remarks.

Joseph May

Date: 11/26/2019 7:13:00 AM

Well crafted...Great write Vijay...best wishes in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:07:00 AM

Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/26/2019 3:28:00 AM

The magic of falling in love presented with the collaboration of nature's beauty! A superb poetic achievement dear, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:06:00 AM

Thank you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2019 11:37:00 PM

You have mastered this form. A lovely romantic piece.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:06:00 AM

That is so very kind of you Richard--much appreciate--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/25/2019 10:52:00 PM

May the Melody of love touch your heart, for always. Leaving you in complete bliss. Your words caress softly around me. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thank you friend for your delightful feedback--much appreciate Brandy--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/25/2019 8:23:00 PM

this is truly a beautiful sonnet my friend, perfect ending too....best wishes in the contest :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:04:00 AM

So glad to read your valued comments my friend--much appreciate, Sandy--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/25/2019 4:40:00 PM

A well written romantic sonnet Vijay. You are so good at these, good luck. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:04:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your comments--many thanks, Tom.

Na Na

Date: 11/25/2019 4:31:00 PM

Hi Vijay. Beautiful poem. This should do well in the contest. Best of luck. Thanks for sharing

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:03:00 AM

Appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks Gregory.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/25/2019 3:36:00 PM

Wow, a beautiful sonnet Vijay! Good luck in the contest. It looks like a winner to me :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2019 11:03:00 AM

Much appreciate Heidi--many thanks. Appreciate the kind remarks.