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Alley

I can still taste the frigid night, that rested upon my lips The moon hid beneath the passing clouds, it was dark Lost was I, yet something inside of me knew where to head I followed, and I discovered the purest love one can find, a fire did spark Standing to herself, she doubted her poet to arise from the bitter night The knott in her troat tigthen as she saw his eyes in the closing distance Stepping out of his car, he spoke unto her, and she ran into his keep so tight Finding herself lost of words, she spoke not, but the feeling was so right The two hearts knew then and there That forever together they belonged as one She became his moon, as he her sun Holding her, he whispered into her soul, see my heart its yours to keep, fair and square The sun shall never rise the same again Bright is the moon that lightens the night, its her smile that reigns his heart Her throne sits warm, for no one could ever replace her dimples in any part Touch me my love, for without thy touch truly I shall go insane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/22/2009 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. God bless you. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/21/2009 8:17:00 AM
Congrats Eduardo on "Alley" being featured. Vince
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:10:00 AM
A beautiful piece, congratulations on this piece being featured this week, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie. Check your mail...
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Date: 4/20/2009 4:38:00 PM
Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:59:00 AM
Your poem Alley is a wonderful love poem, congratulations on it beingfeatured. You have a lot of talent ... love and smiles
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Date: 4/20/2009 9:51:00 AM
Your poem Alley is a wonderful love poem, congratulations on it beingfeatured. You have a lot of talent ... love and smiles
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Date: 4/20/2009 6:35:00 AM
wow congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:44:00 PM
Eduardo, congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 8:26:00 PM
Dear Eduardo,Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Alley" being Featured this week An Amazing Write of a true LOVE Superb ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/19/2009 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:51:00 PM
Interesting view on love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:06:00 PM
Hello Eduardo, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Mine is also featured Keep on posting. Ernilando
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Date: 4/19/2009 12:35:00 PM
Romance is still alive....Conradulations on being featuered....RKay
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Date: 4/19/2009 9:46:00 AM
Eduardo - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/16/2009 4:30:00 PM
Such romance!!! (you are flipping the th's...right...bright..Bright is the moon that lightens the night...double check where ever you have a ht or ght..it's tighten) I have a whole family of folks who do this. Spell check is a MUST. Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:37:00 AM
Beautifully structured. In respect of free verse...May I suggest you develop rhyming stanza though free verse is completely free....8sylab. for each beginning line; and 6 sylab. for the other half of the line, and so forth. I love your poetry...awaiting to read more.
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:16:00 PM
the beauty of your rhyme always pierces my heart my poet. -Alley Poe
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:03:00 PM
Eduardo, I love the sincere devotion the writer has for this Lady, very wonderful to read! Jim
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