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All of My Life

I remember the mist dancing off your skin The silly laugh and sweet little grin The fresh cool breeze of a summer night The moon hanging high in a star filled sky A kiss, a touch, and a soft gentle sigh The reflection of your soul in your eyes Soft words whispered just as lovers do Knowing our bond is forever and always true Holding me captive in your heart for life You calling me just to say good night The sound of your voice in a slow love song Memories that will last my whole life long

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Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2008 10:20:00 AM

Soft and lovely! A great poem to be featured this week. congratulations!~ Carrie

Brandee Augustus

Date: 12/13/2008 10:21:00 AM

This poem is so light and free! You also captured the true essence of romance. Great poem.

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 12/12/2008 10:25:00 AM

So Rich and romantic! The splendor of it speaks so gently. Congratulation on being featured! Love, Chitra

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/9/2008 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your beautiful featured write of the week! Happy holidays! Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/8/2008 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Lolita on the featuring of your romantic poem "All Of My Life." Vince

Elaine George

Date: 12/8/2008 4:36:00 PM

Lena, this is a beautiful poem. I loved it. Thank you for sharing. lainie

John Heck

Date: 12/7/2008 4:23:00 PM

Lena - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Mickey Pig Knuckles

Date: 12/7/2008 2:50:00 PM

Oh Lena, what a meaningful poem you have composed here for your readers to savor. Congratulations for being featured here as this poem is a gem... MPK

Date: 12/7/2008 1:46:00 PM

Yes, it is nice to cherish those memories. Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen

Angela Crabtree

Date: 7/24/2008 11:31:00 AM

This tells me the refusal to commit held no bearing, as I said when we were chatting. I am not sure if you read my poem "Silent Ingression" but I wrote it for you and your cowboy. If you like it, and it fits, I will make you one of my graphic art cards. Just tell me what you want as far as a pic, or I can give you my idea. Love, Ivy

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/24/2008 8:28:00 AM

This is my first read of yours. Nicely done. Those memories will become more cherished with age. God Bless. Vince

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/21/2008 8:01:00 PM

Sweet, romantic words. Especially liked,"The reflection of your soul in you eyes". Yours Matthew Anish

Deneen White

Date: 7/18/2008 3:09:00 PM

Hi Lolita, nice introspective write and very romantic, take care D-nyce

Sara Lokken

Date: 7/17/2008 10:18:00 AM

Very beautifully written. Magical. It is a pleasure to read you for the first time today.:) Keep writing, Sara

Mickey Pig Knuckles

Date: 7/15/2008 7:53:00 AM

Lena, You paint a wonderful picture of romantic love as you share your gift from god above. This poem is beautifully composed by you as I say thank You for sharing... MPK

P Sheart

Date: 7/14/2008 2:52:00 PM

A beautiful love song and story....If everyone could know this kind of love ones cup would overfloweth....Very well written. Will make all your readers want to fall in love all over again! Love LIght Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/14/2008 2:23:00 PM

A beautiful love poem. Brings back magical memories. Sigh. So incredibly romantic. You captured a wonderful moment in time to treasure forever. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/14/2008 12:43:00 PM

This is so loving and lovely. It flows easily and provides such fond memories through clarity for the readers. A wonderful read. Michael