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All In All, True Magnificent Treasures Given - a Collaboration With Robert and Teppo

Luscious the fruits, beautiful under moonlit beams firmly planted roots, outstandingly hot, lush-sent dreams all in all, glorified visions, heavenly sent treasured deeply with rapture stored, sweet love-nights spent. Tender kissing bites, honeyed dessert offered free wonderful the flights, through blossoming forests of trees all in all, miracles were given, lost soul found in resplendent nights, covering soft virgin grounds! Gold fairy dusted, jeweled eyes sending bright smiles each promise trusted, an angel with no dark wiles all in all, true magnificent treasures given gracefully sent, in true-deep bliss, purely driven. Beneath plum skies starlight glistening in her eyes I see all I desire and I do fantasize - looking into her goddess blues, a crystal gaze; of our wild delight to be a forever blaze.. In Eden’s solitude we dance to soft sighs of waltzing wind-songs’ stirring verses promising love with lilting whispered melodies so inspiring my appetite for her wanton and untiring. Ancient woodland’s moon casts smitten luminescence breathtaking in beauty she outshines its presence ecstasy flows an intoxicating river inebriating essence in love’s deliver. Your vivacious beauty enhanced by golden rays illuminating your grace with a loving gaze with ardent reflection of my phantom desire to allow the pledge of love finally transpire. Two common souls released from infernal abyss to engage a rendezvous with heavenly bliss. Together our spirits soar to realms of delight, two lost souls united in the fading twilight. With a chapter closing in reverie’s accord we share a secret paradise of love’s award. All in all, wondrous senses of passion recall, from heart to soul we reminisce, as love is all. Robert J. Lindley, Susan Ashley and Teppo Gren (a collaboration) August 26, 2018 ~ Poem Of The Day ~ Tuesday, August 28, 2018 *Special note*: It is a tremendous honor for me to share in the wonderful recognition of Poem Of The Day with my gifted collaborators, Robert Lindley and Teppo Gren. Robert, thank you for initiating this beautiful piece and inviting Teppo and I to collaborate with you.. Congratulations, my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Together, we join as one voice with one searching soul. Poet’s note: I relished the creative opportunity to compose in this collaboration with my esteemed artistic friends in poetry, Robert Lindley and Teppo Gren. Gentlemen, you inspire me with the depth and breadth of your poetic hearts and souls. My dear friend Robert, as always, the beauty of your verses tantalize me and you intrigue my imagination with your sumptuous imagery of desire and romance. Your poetry truly sparkles with the brilliance of your poetic talents and soulful heart. My dear friend Teppo, your shining verses are filled with the inspired golden light of love, your gifted poetry is deep, stirring and beautifully expressive.. Is an honor and a privilege for me to reach ever higher, striving for your higher standards, when writing with you both. Thank you my wonderful friends, for the gift of your shining fellowship in the beautiful art of creating poetry.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/6/2018 11:10:00 AM

Hi Susan, another excellent write from three true poets who shine in each poetic work written. You each give such poetic grace to this piece. I feel such peace within as I read through poetic grace. This is a true jewel in your poetic crowns. Just excellent my friend, just excellent. Your pens shall ever run gold. This one has to be a fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/7/2018 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, my dear friend, reading your beautiful comments is as moving to me as reading your amazing poetry.. I'm pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration, Mike. Robert and Teppo are both a creative joy to compose with and both are talented poets whose artistry is endless in inspiration and full of soulful emotion. Your kindness is appreciated as is the fav. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/4/2018 12:09:00 PM

Congratulations on POTW! What a superb collaboration by three of our most gifted poets! Just a pleasure to read! Well done, Poets! Hugs and love. Pandita

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/4/2018 9:38:00 PM

Dear Pandita, your treasured thoughts are appreciated and add luster to our collaboration. On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you for the loveliness of your comments and for the kindness of your congrats. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/1/2018 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations for POTD, all of you with this amazing collaboration! :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/1/2018 1:58:00 PM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Heidi, for your lovely comments and kind congrats. It pleases to know you enjoyed our collaboration. It’s my great honor to be able to write with my dear friends and talented poets, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jack Horne

Date: 8/31/2018 10:12:00 AM

wow, a truly beautifully written collaboration

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 11:04:00 AM

Thank you Jack, for sharing your treasured thoughts and I'm pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration. Robert and Teppo are both a creative joy to compose with and both are talented poets whose artistry is endless in inspiration and full of soulful emotion. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/30/2018 4:42:00 PM

A finely crafted piece of poetry with three different poets...quite the accomplishment...a really well-written poem, congratulations on POTD for all three of you

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 10:58:00 AM

Thank you dear Frederic, for sharing your treasured thoughts and heartwarming congrats. I'm pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration. Robert and Teppo are both a creative joy to compose with and both are talented poets whose artistry is endless in inspiration and full of soulful emotion. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Roy Pett

Date: 8/30/2018 5:18:00 AM

Please accept my belated Congratulations to all three amazing poets on achieving POTD with your beautifully written poem, an absolute joy to read. :))

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Roy, for sharing your treasured thoughts and heartwarming congrats. I'm pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration. Robert and Teppo are both a creative joy to compose with and both are talented poets whose artistry is endless in inspiration and soulful emotion. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2018 4:37:00 AM

this is a precious gift from the three of you, susan... the melody of love's fervor enthralls!... congrats on the POTD!...huggs

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 10:51:00 AM

The beauty of your comments enthrall me, Nette.. On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you for your precious thoughts and your heartwarming congrats. It is truly an honor and a great joy for me to be able to write with two such wonderfully talented and inspiring poets, my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/29/2018 5:02:00 PM

Magnífico! My first read of a trio collab ... and you swashbuckling pens were great, Susan, Robert and Teppo. Splendid romantic prose. Love and joy always.

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 10:54:00 AM

On behalf of the swashbucklers, myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Freddie, for your wonderful comments and your heartwarming congrats. It is truly an honor and a great joy for me to be able to write with two such beautifully talented and inspiring poets, my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 8/29/2018 5:02:00 PM

Btw ... Kudos on POTD. Love and smiles and smiles of joy.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2018 2:10:00 PM

- Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. to all three :) - A wonderful writing - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 9:55:00 AM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Anne-Lise for your heartwarming congrats and kind comments. It's my immense pleasure to be able to write with two such talented and inspiring poets, my dear friends Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2018 11:37:00 AM

Hi Susan...I have already read this poem on Teppo's page and marveled at the ease with which this collaboration was executed. Your combined pens give Love its due merit! ~ Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend. // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 11:13:00 AM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you, Paul, for your precious comments and your heartwarming congrats. It truly is my great pleasure and privilege to be able to write with two such talented poets and wonderful friends. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration. Warmest wishes and hugs always my dear friend.. ~Susan

Charles Messina

Date: 8/28/2018 9:51:00 PM

Well, what can I say. You three have done it again. Such a beautiful poem you have all collaborated on, again. Another gem and another fav! Congratulations to all three of you. Warmest wishes to all. ~Charlie

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 9:53:00 AM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Charlie for your lovely comments, your heartwarming congrats and the fav. I treasure the chance to write with two such inspiring and talented poets, my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/28/2018 6:55:00 PM

A spectacular offering from all three of you! Congratulations on having this beautiful poem honored with POTD! : )

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, I truly appreciate your lovely comments and heartwarming congrats.. It is my honor and privilege to be able to create poetry with two such talented and wonderful poets, my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2018 5:13:00 PM

My goodness, what a splendid trio you are together!! I wonder how you divided up the writing!! Did you just keep adding to it one by one? Three creative geniuses expressing the joy of love! (ahh, and I see it's POTD too. BIG congrats to you all)

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 9:39:00 AM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Andrea, for your lovely comments. It pleases to know you enjoyed our collaboration. It’s my great honor to be able to write with my dear friends and talented poets, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/28/2018 12:35:00 PM

Just so beautiful!!! Congratulations on your POTD with this exquisite piece !

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 12:46:00 PM

On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself, thank you Mike, for your heartwarming comments and kind congrats. I’m so pleased you enjoyed our collaboration and I’m always so pleased to have the chance to write with two such gifted poets and my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Warren Doll

Date: 8/28/2018 10:24:00 AM

Stunning collaboration! So worthy of POTD. Congrats to all.

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 12:49:00 PM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Warren for your lovely comments and congrats. I treasure the chance to write with two such inspiring and talented poets, my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/28/2018 9:44:00 AM

One of the best collaborating with two of the best. How good can it get. Simply beautiful soaring poetry. Thank you all and congratulations!

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 12:52:00 PM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Sunlite for your wonderful thoughts and kind congrats. I treasure the opportunity to create poetry with two such immensely talented poets, my dear friends Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/28/2018 8:47:00 AM

What a wonderful collaboration. Brilliantly woven together, two is hard enough, I would suppose, but three? Congratulations on a very well deserved POTD honor...

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 12:57:00 PM

On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself, thank you Charlie for your wonderful comments and kind congrats. I cherish the opportunity to compose with two such beautifully talented poets and my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/28/2018 8:38:00 AM

Coming back with congrats on POTD!

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 12:59:00 PM

On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you Agnes for your wonderful return visit and kindhearted congrats. I treasure the opportunity to create poetry with two such esteemed and gifted poets, my dear friends Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/28/2018 8:29:00 AM

Back again with kudos for a richly-deserved POTD, along with your worthy collaborators, whom I hereby, with no authorization whatsoever, christen "The Three Amigos." May you collaborate on many, many more gems! Blessings and Joy, Gershon

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 3:43:00 PM

My dear friend, Gerson, thank you for the delight of your return visit. On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself (The Three Amigos), muchas gracias for your kind congrats. I cherish the opportunity to compose with two such beautifully talented poets and my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/28/2018 8:29:00 AM

A ruby Tuesday indeed...Lovely to see you here...What more can I say on this beautiful piece of heart...but peace and love to you three united as one...

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 3:45:00 PM

Oh Arturo, ruby Tuesday.. I like that :)) On behalf of myself, Robert and Teppo, thank you for your wonderful comments and kindhearted congrats. I treasure the opportunity to create poetry with two such esteemed and gifted poets, my dear friends Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes always mon ami.. ~Susan

Maria Williams

Date: 8/28/2018 7:40:00 AM

You three are fast becoming my favorite collaborators, Susan, Teppo and Robert what a beautiful poem, I truly loved it from beginning to end. So well deserved your POTD, take a bow and congratulations .....Maria hugs

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 11:01:00 AM

Dear Maria, your lovely presence on my page is always inspiring and wonderful.. On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself, thank you for the kindness of your beautiful comments and your heartwarming congrats. It truly is an immense joy and an honor for me to be able to co-write with two such gifted and esteemed poets as Robert and Teppo.. Warmest wishes my dear friend.. ~Susan

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/28/2018 7:36:00 AM

Can more love and awe be packed into one poem, I don't think so! Wonderful you three! Congratulations to all on your well deserved POTD! xomo x3 <3 <3 <3

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 3:50:00 PM

Well, we could try.. :)) On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself, thank you, Maureen, for your wonderful comments and kind congrats. I cherish the opportunity to compose with two such beautifully talented poets and my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes my lovely friend.. ~Susan <3 <3 <3.. one from each of us :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/28/2018 7:32:00 AM

An enchanting poem glorifying nature's beauty and romanticism by three worthy poets: You dear Susan, Robert and Teppo! Congratulations for well deserved POTD!

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2018 9:44:00 AM

Thank you dear Demetrios for sharing your esteemed thoughts and heartwarming congrats. I'm pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration. Robert and Teppo are both a creative joy to compose with and both are talented poets whose artistry is endless in inspiration and soulful emotion. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/28/2018 6:59:00 AM

Another poetic gem from yourself ,Robert and Teppo, Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. Tom

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/29/2018 8:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Tom. On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself, thank you for the kindness of your wonderful comments and warmhearted congrats. It truly is an immense joy for me to be able to co-write with two such gifted and esteemed poets as Robert and Teppo.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/28/2018 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations Susan, on Poem of the Day. In truth, all three of you have received this honor. :) My heart smiles. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/28/2018 10:23:00 PM

Indeed a shared honor, Brandy, and well said. On behalf of Robert, Teppo and myself, thank you for your wonderful comments and kind congrats. I treasure the opportunity to compose with two such beautifully talented poets and my dear friends, Robert and Teppo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan