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Ajax

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Ajax

The cat show was amazing,
I'd seen every imaginable color and breed. 
I'd never seen so many proud winners in one place.
I met a breeder and I told him what I'd need.

He had three of the most gorgeous
gray eared Siamese kittens I'd ever seen.
I came back once, then twice
To play with the smallest one his body so lean.

To my surprise he asked me if I wanted him for free
Ecstatic I kiss the breeder and held Ajax up close
Ajax had won one third place ribbon but I didn't care.
For this I grabbed my friends and we went out for a toast.

Ajax was never allow out of the house.
But I had some work done on the house and
the carpenter left the door open and Ajax ran out.
Immediately he got hit by a car near the sand.
 
I ran out and picked him up hugging his lifeless body.
I never gotten another cat again.

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  1. Date: 11/23/2013 11:52:00 AM
    very moving and sad poem

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 12:05:00 PM
    very interesting. I enjoyed it.

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 5:46:00 AM
    Nice elegiac expressions, Julie

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 2:51:00 PM
    quite the lovely poem...i guess it happens to everyone at some point in time love your work, izzy

  1. Date: 11/19/2013 2:19:00 PM
    all the details are mintioned but i find it hard to comment on. everything is there the value the love the carelessness. the sudden loss. but it's still hard to decide who's at fault.