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Against the Current

Against ills' currents Constantly was he fighting Drowned him they have found! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 30 May 2016 5-7-5

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Bl Devnath

Date: 6/2/2016 12:29:00 PM

One who sacrifices with love and sincerity suffers more. To do well being sometimes one must go against the current of ill will of others. Excellent haiku of +7 my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/4/2016 3:41:00 AM

Thank you very much my kind friend, BLD. You are a treasure of true feelings. God bless you!

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/30/2016 10:58:00 AM

nicely penned Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2016 7:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Lenny! God bless you!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/30/2016 10:57:00 AM

A very angst filled poem...How pleasant it would have been if they could have rescued him in time. Blessings, dear. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/31/2016 7:54:00 AM

The one who fights for goodness, love and justice is the one who loses his life dear, Eileen! It is not angst poem but a poem that tells a true story!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2016 5:09:00 AM

- Never give up .... great written dear Demetrios - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/30/2016 5:47:00 AM

Certainly not! Thank you so much dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs