Again

I want another shot at life, this one’s almost over. Couldn’t ever concentrate, too many possibilities. What are the odds, that it ever could be any different?

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Charlie Smith

Date: 1/27/2019 9:28:00 AM

Again indeed David, with a little faith it may be...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/26/2019 10:41:00 AM

All possibilities are open but we have to be ready them with courage to embrace my friend! Profound question that touches the core of one's soul dear, David!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/25/2019 2:26:00 PM

If only...it would be like that, every time.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/25/2019 9:44:00 AM

If only we could have "one moment in time" again and again! "too many possibilities" for us to reach.. a thought provoking write! My deepest regards. Blessings.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/25/2019 5:25:00 AM

Whoa - now that is some deeply profound personal thinking! My opinion on your probably rhetorical question, I'll spare you, my opinion on your poem is that its a pauser, will have many readers reflecting. All the best ... CayCay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/24/2019 4:14:00 PM

I believe the soul goes on forever, it is only released in the dream state, and finally in death for a bit. Then it has to come back to learn the lessons it did not learn in the multitude of lifetimes before this lifetime, so never give up hope. Just relax and enjoy your choices. To me this is the only fair thing that could happen. And our God is a fair and loving God right?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2019 3:31:00 PM

gosh, if reincarnation is true, you could end up with a very different life. Sure will be interesting to get to the end of the trip and know for sure!! In any event, I predict it is gonna be splendid if we end up all in another world!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/24/2019 1:50:00 PM

"Could it be any different?" Perhaps!!! Maybe not. Ups and downs are a part of life, learning from them- is the key. Having "too many possibilities." Is never a bad thing. In fact, it is a very good thing. I think so, anyway. ~ Brandy

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/24/2019 1:32:00 PM

100%! When anything on this earth "dies", it simply becomes something else, as clearly established by DNA millennial records. The choice is whether to regenerate in Florida, or Afghanistan! Aloha! Rico

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2019 11:12:00 AM

a deep reflection which allow us to move forward or take a back seat... nice one, david.. huggs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2019 10:20:00 AM

That last line is the true question and mystery. I don’t know if we started over if we could change. We’d all like to think so.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2019 10:19:00 AM

That last line is the true question and mystery. I don’t know if we started over if we could change. We’d all like to think so.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/24/2019 8:57:00 AM

Great question! Much food for thought for all of us in that question, David. … Would we do it differently? / Would it be any different? … Eternal questions … ~ Gershon

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/24/2019 8:01:00 AM

Just an end leading to another beginning.

Joseph May

Date: 1/24/2019 7:27:00 AM

Some say our destiny is set at birth, Very nice tanka..

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/23/2019 11:54:00 PM

I tend to think it all depends on karma David. Your journey will continue one day. Blessings, Connie : ) xxoo