Get Your Premium Membership

Aftertaste

Walk me down these nostalgic streets And laugh and make me wander Make me feel the bliss that dwells in me Before it tears asunder For I have seen you often whilst passing by These shops and bicycles and walls I have sensed you in this rising smoke of Restaurants and cigarettes and squalls For even in these quieted nights When my thoughts are left untold I begin to bespeak your calming presence In the words of my every ode I begin to delude and question time, Which in these false timepieces warps I begin to rest my body in utter oblivion As if it were a floating corpse And every morning I awake subdued, My feelings and thoughts misplaced For even my coffee bears in its brew Your bitter aftertaste

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/25/2012 6:19:00 PM
Congrats Farah on your poem's selection as semi-finalist. This is well deserved. I wish you success in the Finals.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2012 11:10:00 AM
Congrats on making the final round. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Farah. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 1/11/2012 3:59:00 PM
Congratulations...I really enjoyed your poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/4/2012 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Farah. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 12/30/2011 1:35:00 PM
wow what a bang up ending! So glad to see you in the winner circle little one!! CONGRAD's Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Farah. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/10/2011 1:11:00 PM
I like the end especially....nice line about the coffee!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things