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After Dusk

Dusk has descended. Lights put on their sparkle show around the valley. All daily chores behind me, I’m engulfed by sweet relief. Night drops quietude. My house absorbs the silence. Shadows come creeping as I embrace the solitude, for I will wield a poet’s pen. As my muse whispers, I see two pairs of eyes that watch me placidly. I scribble thoughts and at times. . . . pause to pet my lovely cats. 10/3/2011 For Joseph May's Free Verse - Old or New Poetry Contest
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Date: 8/30/2022 12:35:00 AM
Oh this exudes such wonderful feelings. Congrats on your fine win, Andy. I know it's been long...but it's nice to catch up. XOXO...
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Date: 8/29/2022 9:55:00 PM
I like this Andrea. Life seen through the eyes of a poet! Congratulations on your First place win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/29/2022 7:07:00 PM
As evergreen as ever. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/29/2022 5:55:00 PM
A cat's eye view of the muse in action, Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/9/2015 12:25:00 PM
A 7 for the wonderful write an eye full of your kitties . Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:08:00 PM
- love the mood you created with your imagery Andrea -simply charming ending to the poem - congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2012 2:47:00 PM
sweet and lovely, and very poetic, the visual of this poem, is wonderful,, you and Joe have a wonderful christmas Andrea....
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Date: 10/9/2011 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea. How relaxing you make this work seem, and the placid cats for company, nice....Luv Margaret
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:42:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a dynamic win with grandiose poetry my friend.. superbly crafted piece as always luv..
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Date: 10/8/2011 10:50:00 AM
Neat poem Andrea on your 24 hours. I guess my last 24 have been busy. Brother and family are coming thru town for lunch tomorrow on their way home. love phyl
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Date: 10/8/2011 9:45:00 AM
"I see two pairs of eyes that watch me placidly." The introductory of a mystery quickly revealed Andrea. Smile. Unique idea. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:06:00 PM
Nice poem! I had a cat named Bilbo for many years. I miss her. Good use of form, too. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/5/2011 9:05:00 AM
oh to be alone with nothing but pen and paper and the ocasional pet to pet.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:50:00 AM
Nicely poetic and descriptive. I have two cats, as you probably know...they sent potted plants reeling left and right the other day, as they chased a wasp in the kitchen! They stunned it and I killed it! Hope you are well. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:36:00 AM
I wish you the best in the contest with this beautiful poem Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2011 3:32:00 AM
A soothing write that relaxes the mind.Best wishes Andrea:)
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Date: 10/3/2011 5:47:00 PM
What a lovely piece - and such awesome descriptions, Andrea
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Date: 10/3/2011 5:43:00 PM
I had a sigh of pleasure after reading your poem..relaxed and at peace..great work. BG
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:53:00 AM
well Andrea I certainly felt relaxed and enthralled by these exquisite lines for Nette.. hypnotic quality of beauty luv..good luck in contest.. sorry for lateness.. this move is overwhelming .. and now business is booming with holiday approaching...oh.. need a few more lifetimes to catch up..haha..
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Date: 10/3/2011 11:27:00 AM
Lovely - the quiet and the kitties. Did you read about my Blondy? I was shattered. Love, daver
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Date: 10/3/2011 10:47:00 AM
The best time of day. Tony
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Date: 10/3/2011 10:27:00 AM
Such nice series of tanka for nette's contest. Best wishes in the contest,ANDREA
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Date: 10/3/2011 9:34:00 AM
This is excellenr, Andrea! I love it. Kim
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