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A'Flit

I must admit That bit by bit, My thoughts alight And then they split. They won’t commit Or stop and sit; They touch down then Proceed to flit. And so, to wit, I will submit To sometimes throwing Quite a fit. For it takes grit To not permit One’s fortitude To up and quit When we are hit In stomach’s pit By what’s implied From that first flit.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2014 9:59:00 PM
Once again I find myself taking your exquisite talent for granted. This one rolls along with cohesive continuity. I love it.
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Date: 4/8/2014 7:33:00 PM
very cute monorhyming in so many of these lines. Clever lady!
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Date: 4/8/2014 5:10:00 PM
I have to admit/ that your poem, dear Ilene/ is quite a hit! Well done! Good to see you again!
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