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Adrift In the Ebb

tryst of the moon and the stars - oh how far off, when the greed of war spoils with feldspar. eruptions of not the loins but clashes of steel — political coins care not how one feels. a lightning grip on lovers, mocking, celebrating their aloneness. the dark hovers over the waters of Loch Ness. spouse weeps. tears constantly fill the freshwater deep. the warmonger monster would’st kill. any great and honorable name that can be caught in the web — her man would never be the same, adrift in the ebb. she tries to reattach limbs, pry open his hopeful eyes, fish for him with sermons and hymns but he believes in Nessie-lies. tryst of the moon and stars -oh how far off, when the greed of war spoils with feldspar. 1/13/2021

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Date: 1/16/2021 7:26:00 PM
I like the continuity of this beauty Kim.
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:34:00 PM
Rather sad tale of one who disbelieves. Great imagination. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 3:41:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 1/13/2021 8:11:00 AM
A precious necklace of verses dearest, Kim! Enchanted!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/13/2021 8:54:00 AM
Thank you!

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