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not that the sun rises out of the ocean it does'nt nor the moon sail the night time sky it would'nt would that the stars sprinkle themselves in the ocean if they could and the sea reflect the sky in motion yes it would let clouds wander by themselves and be good would that winds practice their gentle breeze like they should and waves reach the shore with ease surround myself with palm trees make the promise to never leave ask the Lord for my Eve and think this is how it will always be

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Date: 9/27/2011 8:26:00 AM
I saved this one to my favs a long while ago..it was such a dreamy type of poem and from a male perspective. Refreshing. It WOULD be nice to see the moon sailing the sky and the stars sprinkling the ocean. Oh, and the thot of winds practicing is very smooth. Let them practice on ME! Best to u, Gwendolen
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:49:00 AM
wow, what an amazing, intoxicating poem. I felt every word. Very talented ways of expression. thank you
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Date: 5/3/2011 3:13:00 PM
John sweet and a loving picture you have painted here. A jewel to be savoured, Well done. Anne
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:46:00 AM
A wonderful poem and you will eventually find your eve. Glad you are okay and sounds like the tornado was a scary thing. Glad no one was hurt and that you and your family are fine. Take care love phyl
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:54:00 PM
Swell write-packed with great personification! You write some very excellent work, John. Another favorite! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/13/2011 11:11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one, John...It has such a romantic flavor..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/13/2011 3:52:00 AM
now this sounds a very tranquil and pleasant scene, I think I'll join you, we just need one of those huge parasols and a couple of pina coladas...
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Date: 4/12/2011 3:37:00 PM
Your "Eve" will come to you when least expected, John. I love the way you describe the reflection of the sun, moon and stars on the ocean. When I go offshore fishing, these reflections make me feel so serene. Lovely poem, John
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:18:00 PM
dreamy quality soars so high, John
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Date: 4/11/2011 2:36:00 PM
loved this beautiful and touching piece of poetry.
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:49:00 PM
What a wonderful dreamy thought, John. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
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Date: 4/11/2011 12:35:00 PM
oh john, smart ending it makes me smile! adam's first wife was lilith, right?? greeat work! :) huggs, nette
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