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© G. V., 07-20-2013, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

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acoustic chords

Forthcoming maid shall be his bride
along the margin of past years,
they were two distant pioneers,
and floating dreamers on their tide.

Her steady absence - (maybe not)
pristine of thought, adorned the drifts,
away from corals and sea reefs,
- her splendid pride, became his knot.

New vineyards now adorn the rails,
arcane the train, on distance fades,
the northern gusts like cutting blades,
became comrades of lonesome trails.

His railroad trip invites their song,
remote of feasts the paths ascribe,
where agons of passed lives describe
how pride in void expends the wrong.

Denoted moments, College verse,
their distant lives to then direct,
her laughter's threshold to project,
the Springtime fields of blooming thyrse.

Attracts him back where years convey,
her solving of the maths on board,
unique of thoughts his smiles award
and her acoustic chords portray.

© G.V. 07-20-2013 All rights reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)

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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 5:09:00 AM
    Past visions unfold in these beautiful lines! Loved it! Congrats Giorgio! and I fave this...

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:06:00 PM
    Enjoyed the write on Platonic relationships and congratulations on the fine win, Giorgio

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 8:41:00 PM
    Your poems require a little more attention with your fanciful language. This is superb, Giorgio! Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:17:00 PM
    very interesting one with the mention of maths and chords!! What lovely trips on a train! Congrats for your win in this contest.

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 9:10:00 AM
    Giorgio,a wonderful poem.Congratulations. great win.(: ) Jenish.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 1:57:00 PM
    This was excellent and extremely beautiful. You have an old world charm, and I love it!

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 10:00:00 PM
    Wonderful piece poetry, well done Georgio...Peter

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 9:19:00 PM
    Hi. :) You have some soup mail.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:49:00 PM
    it's all about cadence, G.. i like the tempo, assonance and substance of this delicate piece... right on the beat..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 8:05:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, a unique way in hitting the perfect notes. YES! :-)

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 5:43:00 PM
    I love the old feel of your writing, it really adds to the mood.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 7/20/2013 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    p.s. please consider entering a poem into my contest Girl Rising. I would be very honored.