Absurd

Absurd figures at night Arrive when all waves are Asleep, buds of deep night Appear along with the Animate Amazon Astir in a pink joy Attended by archers _____________________ August 11, 2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/16/2016 5:13:00 AM

Congrats Probir, for your fine placement in the contest!! ;-)

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/16/2016 6:39:00 AM

Thank you ...

Paul Callus

Date: 8/15/2016 10:09:00 AM

Impressed by the creative way you handled this form, Probir. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/15/2016 11:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paul ... Regards ...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2016 7:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Probir! ; )

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:13:00 AM

Thank you ...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 4:52:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Probir:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/14/2016 2:14:00 AM

Thank you ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/13/2016 11:45:00 AM

Probir, conrats on a well written Pleiades! Thank you for supporting my contest! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2016 4:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:43:00 AM

Thank you ... Your 'Assuming' has been lovely and congratulations on your win ...

Lu Loo

Date: 8/13/2016 3:55:00 AM

Probir, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:45:00 AM

Thank you ... Congratulations for your lovely 'Assuming' and its obvious win ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2016 1:27:00 AM

sounds like a crazy dream. !!! Way to go and congratulations

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/13/2016 5:46:00 AM

Absurd to reality-lovers ... not crazy certainly ! ... Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/12/2016 5:25:00 AM

Admirably written my friend, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 12:47:00 PM

Thank you ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/11/2016 4:30:00 PM

Sounds like a very peaceful dream, Probir. You have done extremely well with this form. Good luck in contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 2:00:00 AM

Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2016 1:57:00 PM

- When I read these "A - letter" poems .......... it look so easy ... but I find it a bit difficult - This one is really great, Probir ! - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 2:00:00 AM

Thank you ...

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/11/2016 8:43:00 AM

Hi Probir, This a good entry for contest. Great imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/12/2016 2:01:00 AM

Thank you ...

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/11/2016 6:38:00 AM

Terrific imagery, Probir; night is my favorite time for thinking and writing.

Probir Gupta
Date: 8/11/2016 6:49:00 AM

Thank you ...