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Above the Clouds

Above the clouds, I long to be Among the other things I see Where I can stand and shout out loud Here I stand, above a cloud! Where whispy trails of jets in flight In blue skies, patchwork quilts of white While here below I am, a grain of sand As people travel from a far off land Above the clouds on a pitch black night The moon peeps out to share his light The stars still seem to find a way To dance around the cloud's display I'm amazed at the ability of man To send satellites soaring, like they can Above the clouds and far beyond Like they posses a magic wand But, most majestic of them all Is that snowy mountain top so tall Where I can stand and shout out loud Here I stand, above a cloud! ©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/28/2013 7:51:00 PM
Indeed I enjoyed, a masterful job. I am sure it would have done very well. I'm glad I got to read it.
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Date: 6/27/2013 12:45:00 AM
Beautiful, ethereal and ever so wonderful! Thank you for composing such a lovely art! -Benjamin
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Date: 6/24/2013 2:12:00 AM
Very lovely gem. I love your concluding lines. Still a winning pen in my book. Well done Donna. AO
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Date: 6/23/2013 2:00:00 PM
ohh, but this is surely a winner, donns.. i soar with your wings of beauty!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/23/2013 8:54:00 AM
Hi, my dear friend Donna! I'm sure this will win! How I wish you were able to enter this in the contest. i love the flow & it's a perfect quatrain. I extremely enjoy & feel like floating above viewing the wonderful image you've creatively pictured in your poem. Thank you so much for sharing. So enjoyed. Thanks a lot as well for your precious time stopping by on my write. Wish you all the best always! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/22/2013 11:30:00 PM
Hi Donna, Your poem leaves me speechless, like looking down off a huge snow capped mountain, your work is excellent in concept and design, a true poet lauriette it seems, thanks for sharing so much. John
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:37:00 PM
This is a beauty that would have made the Winners' Circle! Well, you're not alone, Donna..I missed Drake's contest too but posted it anyway. Thank you for your kind comment on mine!
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:40:00 PM
Donna a wonderful poem ty for reading mine Shadow x smile
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Date: 6/22/2013 3:22:00 PM
Wish you my dear all the time to hover above the clouds of happiness! Beautiful pictures of your imagination!
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Date: 6/22/2013 1:37:00 PM
OH MD.....I must say....it had me flying above the clouds. Honestly....I'm sure you would have gotten right up there on the list of winners with this! Too bad you entered it late. LOVE YOU AS ALWAYS!!!!! MD....next time you are above the clouds...look down and find me and pull me up will ya???
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Date: 6/22/2013 1:07:00 PM
this is beautiful Donna...I enjoyed it...winning wishes
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Date: 6/22/2013 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful..................:):):):)
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/23/2013 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much...
Date: 6/22/2013 12:02:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful flow and rhyme. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/21/2013 4:30:00 PM
I feel myself being lifted up, and floating too, upon the clouds! Lovely, Donna!!
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Date: 6/21/2013 3:45:00 PM
An excellent set of quatrains with great rhythm! I love your marvelous imagery and your perfect couplet rhyming! Keep in touch!! Best wishes, Keithj
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Date: 6/20/2013 10:08:00 PM
wow, you missed it!! DANG. it is an outstanding one for this contest!! So sorry! FAVE
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/23/2013 9:24:00 PM
Yeah...I got busy...but glad you liked it...thanks Andrea..you are very kind to me
Date: 6/20/2013 10:02:00 PM
You have written a lovely gem of a write by this one! my friend! I am enamored by the incredibly awesome nature of this delightful pleasing poem! I really loved reading this amazing piece this evening! What a grandiose poem, sorry it didn't get included into the contest, too bad too because it would have placed high! Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/23/2013 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Russell...appreciate that..I have good intentions...not enough hours in the day...
Date: 6/20/2013 7:58:00 PM
Donna, this is wonderful! Light hearted, with excellent flow and rhyme. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim
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Donna Jones
Date: 6/23/2013 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much...

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