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I desired the moon-ray in your eyes last night, it was up there for only us igniting our ambrosial dreams coiled as hidden silhouettes... and though clandestine, discreet our moans trickled with fruit's passion as damp bodies claimed sweet intention, the one we could relate to because anything was possible; through gossamer veils of secrecy liberating us from obligations... for wantonness became our elixir when each gush, each thrust was a flame that cravings were multiplied under illicit skies... and in the nectar of morning after, I think we both knew how I desired the moon-ray in your eyes last night. ---------------- It Was A Beautiful Affair A Lewis Raynes Contest 7/6/106

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Date: 7/13/2016 10:24:00 AM
Congrats Nette, for your placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/11/2016 2:30:00 AM
Congratulations on a totally licit win, Nette. Loved the poem. ~karam~
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Date: 7/10/2016 1:47:00 PM
Lovely win, nette....skat
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:18:00 PM
You leave us with no doubt, Nette....it is a most beautiful love affair! Desire and fulfilled liberated passion make a winning romantic combination! #7 Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/6/2016 7:45:00 PM
passionate my friend, there in lies a soul that flames with hunger for life...good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/6/2016 3:39:00 AM
Moments like these make life worth living dear, nette. Excellent writin. A seven.
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Date: 7/5/2016 7:36:00 PM
very beautiful write nette...I like the repeated use of the line how I desired the moon-ray in your eyes.
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Date: 7/5/2016 3:06:00 PM
This captivating poem stirred my imagination and blew my mind!
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