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A View From My Deck

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A View From My Deck

Fluffy white floaters on the breeze
Parachuting from the sky
Petals off the apple tree
A carpet on the lawn

Happy birds that tweet and trill
Songs of constant joy
Hopping and bopping from branch to branch
High rise nesting architects

Hummers zip and stop on a dime
Hover at colourful flowers
Drinking natures sweetened nectars
Yellow bush a favourite

Garden buzzes its own rhythm
Yellow pollinators streaking by
Moving from one plant to another
Nature's wondrous helpers

On the deck with morning coffee steaming
Marvelling at the non-stop action
Much better than watching the morning news
Relaxed, refreshed, renewed for the day

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 3:17:00 PM
    A beautiful view through your words! Molly

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Well done, perfect way to start the day. The poem is peaceful like the setting

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 7:05:00 AM
    you take me there fantastic poem I love it Shadow x

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 2:26:00 AM
    Stunning Rick, fill with serenity and bliss. :) ...

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Thanks for giving us a look through your eyes. I love what I see !! (and love too, the smell of coffee brewing! :)

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 10:34:00 AM
    I enjoyed this serene scenery, Rick! A wondeful treat. Annalise

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 10:05:00 AM
    I love the imagery... beautiful morning!