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A Very Berry Kiss

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A Very Berry Kiss

He’d take dates back to his place for late-night pancakes smeared with golden butter, doused in luscious boysenberry sauce. Halfway through this small repast, he’d lean forward, letting moist berry lips move softly over his lovely lady’s mouth. For PD's Kissing Game Poetry Contest and now for Nathan's Anything Goes

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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:45:00 PM
    Andea, Sorry to disappoint but I dont remember you ever telling me that you have faved one of mine. But I find my poem ' Andrea Dietrich' faved ( may be it was by you is my fair guess), but then it doesn't qualify for entry!! luv, Jag

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:03:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea....I knew it would be a winner! Did you see that I added 4 more lines to my kiss poem since you first read?

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:57:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! A tasty kiss you have hear.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:36:00 AM
    delicious ...congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 6:25:00 AM
    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Andrea!!! Hugs :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Andy, Berry good xx

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 12:51:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Andrea! I love your poem. Etheree form is an excellent idea for the theme. I can see your every word like hearts from the kiss spreading wider on the air. CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR!!!!! HUGS, leonora

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:51:00 PM
    An etheree for this contest? I like the idea. The poem turned out great. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:02:00 PM
    Andrea, ,, Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD

  1. Date: 7/27/2012 9:07:00 PM
    Oh, I'm not sure about those 'sweet lips'.:) A fun write, sounds like he's the griddle master! Whatever form you chose to write in, it always feels like a winner! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Sultry sweet Andrea!!! You could give lessons...I love this! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 12:05:00 AM
    That would be sweet lips for sure. I had a very busy weekend this weekend but did manage to get in some computer time. Had our 40th anniversary today and went out for all three meals plus out last night to the bar with friends. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 1:10:00 AM
    ‡ OMG, That Is Disgusting, Phew ';' Hahaha, I Hope She Was Able To Fall Asleep After Such Trauma ? Just Kidding, Sweet Beautiful Extraordinary & Hilariously Outragous Andrea * Actually I Love Lots & Lots Of Butter *.* With Any Type Of Berries Especially Strawberries ... Wonderful & I Love The Precious Way In Which Your Fascinating Beauty So Tenderly Painted Her Lips & Mouth; 'Beautiful' ... My Luv, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 11:37:00 AM
    romantic piece indeed here, my friend

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 11:38:00 AM
    berry, berry tasty, andie!... this will soar over at carol's... aren't spots won the same as glories?.. you are doing real well, dearie!.. sultry as it can get!:) huggs!

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 10:18:00 AM
    Andrea, sweet lips indeed. you got shaking tonight.... great work. moving into a comfort mouth of his lady's colud be only solution ..hhmmmmm, All the best in your contest.

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 11:45:00 AM
    Sweet lips indeed Andrea, you got me smiling tonight.. I am doing much better after the surgery thank you.. I got the results of the tests back last week. Luckily nothing cancerous which was awesome news ;) luv Wilma

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:43:00 AM
    Sweet lips indeed. Very moving write. Good luck with the contest.

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