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a swimmer

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a swimmer

thunder and lightning
as rain lashes the ocean - -
a swimmer turns back

for Heather’s Ocean-ku contest

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  1. Date: 7/28/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Well described and worded write Jack, and well done on the win..'

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:54:00 PM
    I missed this, Jack...frightening! Congratulations on a well deserved win! x Annalise

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:05:00 PM
    This is like Florida, lol, so scary, enjoyed it, Jack!

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:33:00 AM
    So vivid. and scary.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:48:00 PM
    Many congrats for this awesome ku and win.

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:02:00 PM
    Jack, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:09:00 AM
    Congrats on your wonderful win,Jack...Nice going...

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:21:00 AM
    many congratulations Jack xx

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Congrats on your win . love phyl

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:06:00 PM
    This is so different... congratulations

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:46:00 PM
    I hope he/she makes it back! yikes! If I were them I'd be seriously worried! I think you captured the danger here quite well... best wishes in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 7:21:00 PM
    another outstanding one, gosh, you are amazing today, my friend.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 3:27:00 PM
    interesting and a delight to read...

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 5:11:00 PM
    I would turn back too if there was lightning out in the ocean, even if the salt keeps the electric current down from a lightning strike! This is a tremendous Haiku my friend, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:53:00 PM
    Winning material for sure..Very descriptive, creative, and unique..Thanks for the visits by my work..Sara

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Reminds me of one of my fav. movies, Jack...Storm of the Century w/George Clooney.Best wishes for Heather's contest! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 2:51:00 PM
    ha! very vivid!