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A Story of Survival

He asked me if I'd like a drink I told him that I would He lived in a one room cabin Back yonder in the wood He poured three fingers in a cup Then poured himself one, too. Smiled an' said he made his livin' Peddlin' this pure home brew. I'd stumbled on this man named Jeb While roundin' up some strays He dang near shot my head clean off 'Fore I could have my says Once he saw I was a cowboy He got downright friendly He had a dog and a rooster - A hoss kinda spindly He had a pair of deep blue eyes And auburn hair that shone He told me his whole story then And why he lived alone He'd been here pushin' forty years A sheriff on his tail Said he ain't broke no law he knew - But he'd put him in jail He'd got close to the sheriff's wife When she was all alone She gave birth to a blue eyed boy With auburn hair that shone The brown eyed sheriff wasn't pleased An' oiled his forty five So Jeb ran here and built a still To try and stay alive So here he lives and here he'll stay 'Mongst the trees and the vines A prisoner of them deep blue eyes And auburn hair that shines April, 2016 Contest: Your Choice (7) Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 7/31/2016 9:16:00 AM
- Larry, a great choice of your poems, congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 8:50:00 AM
Thank you! I lived on a large ranch in West Texas growing up and everybody read Zane Grey. Later in life in Southern California, I found that he had a home on Catalina Island...Larry
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Date: 7/30/2016 10:33:00 PM
Always a winner Larry, congratulations...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/30/2016 10:41:00 PM
Thank you Charlie...I'm trying to catch up to your excellent standards. ...Larry
Date: 7/30/2016 7:30:00 PM
Larry, congratulations on your First Place win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Great story. Sandra
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/30/2016 10:39:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I've been enjoying your work lately. You are a talented lady!!!..Larry
Date: 7/30/2016 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, Larry, I truly enjoyed the story ! Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/30/2016 4:21:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. My pleasure to participate...Larry
Date: 7/30/2016 2:37:00 PM
Very nice. I enjoyed that story. Honestly, I kept thinking there was going to be some Beverly Hillbillies punch line at the end. Congrats on your placement.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/30/2016 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Tom!!..Larry
Date: 4/21/2016 7:57:00 PM
Another goodie Larry! Enjoy reading your poetry as usual!:)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/21/2016 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl!!

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