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A storm is brewing in my life Dark clouds now fill my head You should have been here beside me But you’re in your lover’s bed Our relationship has been stormy A turbulent atmosphere fills the air You breezed into my life like a hurricane Now I’ve found you really don’t care I can’t cope with the tempest you’ve created Waves of emotion crash over me So now I’m heading for calmer waters I’ll wave adieu, now I’m finally free A storm is brewing Sponsored by Kelly Deschler 04~17~16

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/22/2016 1:23:00 AM

Good for you. The dawn of tomorrow is always golden....

Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2016 3:40:00 AM

Pure fiction write for me Pashang:-) thanks for the comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 4/21/2016 6:40:00 AM

Can totally relate to this poem Been there done that and never again. Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 4/21/2016 6:41:00 AM

I think many can relate to this poem Mama bear:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/19/2016 7:19:00 PM

G'day Jan ... like all storms, they do end Jan. Good luck - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2016 7:22:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 4/19/2016 3:27:00 PM

Well done Jan. Calm is always best.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2016 3:33:00 PM

Thankfully its a fictional write for me Jean but I am sure there are people who can relate:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/18/2016 4:59:00 PM

Beautiful poem in contest, a fictional piece beautifully worded my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. 7 i feel. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 5:04:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2016 4:44:00 PM

A storm in a relationship....luckily you're heading for calmer waters and freedom:) Lovely fictional poem, Jan! // Would have liked to write a poem for this contest, but can't seem to find the time:( ~ hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 4:49:00 PM

I know you have an awful lot of things to keep you busy Paul - I just use contests as a way to improve my creativity and skills and more expsoure to my work if I am fortunate to get placed:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2016 4:40:00 PM

I love your emotional take on this contest Jan. I hope to see this high on the winner's list my friend! #7 ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 4:47:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/18/2016 1:16:00 PM

Well written Jan, a most deserving entry for the contest. I hope fictionally composed...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 4:42:00 PM

25 is actually one of my favourite numbers:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/18/2016 1:49:00 PM

25 is a wonderful number, congratulations Jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 1:21:00 PM

Total fiction for me Charlie - later this year we will celebrate our silver wedding anniversary:-) hugs Jan xx

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/18/2016 11:56:00 AM

The sketch you have painted is strongly indicating the storm moving and creating its effect dear friend. It's a beautiful poem showing the conflict of mind with the power of words used in the poem. A full 7+ for this beautiful write and my good wishes for your contest entry dear friend. Thank you for your visit on my page. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 11:58:00 AM

Thanks so much for your kind words Ravindra:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/18/2016 11:07:00 AM

Wow, this is good, a storm indeed, you write it well, so well one can feel it approaching..

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 11:17:00 AM

Thanks Harry thankfully for me it is a fictional write:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 4/18/2016 8:46:00 AM

Quite a harsh storm to face. My rival was not a woman...a bottle. A great portrayal of betrayal, Jan. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 8:55:00 AM

I can imagine any 'rival' whether another person or an addiction can definitely make huge waves in a relationship:-( hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/18/2016 8:10:00 AM

This is beautifully written about a bitter storm:) All the best in the contest:)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 8:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Jo - I have seen very different takes on the 'storm' theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2016 7:35:00 AM

Dearest Jan, I do not think that there is anyone who cannot relate to your poem! We all have being through that and as long as there are relationships people will relate to this Brewing Storm! Excellent!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 8:32:00 AM

I agree Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2016 3:26:00 AM

Marvelously done dear, Jan! I loved it, although it is painful but its poetic quality is wondrous!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2016 6:10:00 AM

Sheer poetic licence to me too thankfully Demetrios but I am sure there are people who will relate to my words:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/17/2016 9:34:00 PM

Jan this is, well and excuse me if I repeat myself, one of your best! You can do limerick and humor so well, but you have the talent of an artist that can do many forms and styles! Needless to say thats at the minimum 2 books!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/17/2016 9:38:00 PM

lol let me get the humour book out of the way - 366 poems is a tall order:-)I do appreciate all your encouragment and support Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx