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A Step Away

Simmering and swinging out on a limb Life all around full to the brim Swooshing and sliding in it's place Chatting and joining the rat race Hurry and scurry and passing us by With a heave and a hoe and give a sigh Round and round with audible sound Our feet barely have time to touch the ground A look or a glance at the sights Acknowledge , try to be polite Stop, be stationary for a while Take a little step a way and smile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 3/31/2013 2:52:00 PM
Hey! I love this poem! Great JOB! I love the 1st 2 lines and the last 2 lines! I love the rhymes and the imagery! I love the jubilant meaning behind this poem and how you explained yourself in this poem. Sounds like one of my childhood memories. This poem makes me beam! Keep that pen flowin! Sincerely, DWB
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Date: 3/31/2013 2:53:00 PM
oops sorry! Repeats! hahaha id love to read more of your poems later this week or whenever I have the time.. xDD
Date: 3/31/2013 2:50:00 PM
Hey! I love this poem! Great JOB! I love the 1st 2 lines and the last 2 lines! I love the rhymes and the imagery! I love the jubilant meaning behind this poem and how you explained yourself in this poem. Sounds like one of my childhood memories. This poem makes me beam! Keep that pen flowin! Sincerely, DWB
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Date: 3/30/2013 4:19:00 PM
Phyllis, this endures a good flowing rhyming poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2013 4:29:00 PM
Congrats Phyl on this good advice poem being featured. We all need to do that now and then.
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:31:00 PM
"be stationary for a while. Take a step a way and smile." Yes, that is such good advice, Phyllis, I am glad I came back here to find this one! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:54:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. You have me smiling. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen
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