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A Soul Awakened

As I fall asleep, I exit one world only to enter another. I dream each night of a man I never really see. Within a crowd of faceless people, I know he's not too far. What seems like a game of hide and seek, we finally do embrace. It's an unexplainable feeling that we've met in our past life. Even though his face isn't clear, he illuminates of his love. I'm captured by his electric blue aura overriding my own. It feels like two souls have met and has become as one. As quickly as we embraced, we've parted in my dreams. My soul has awakened within the light of dawn, wondering... Can dream souls ever meet in their waking state, Or only within realities of their dreams? 03/18/2013

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Date: 6/5/2013 8:54:00 AM
Very good write I really enjoyed this! - Edward
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 6/5/2013 6:36:00 PM
Edward thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
this one is fascinating!!! Glad I took the time to read this particular winners list. I Have not seen you in a while and I'm glad to see this poem at first place. Congratulations.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 4:38:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulation. Still recovering from my surgeries. Sometimes I get behind in reading and commenting on PS poets. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/1/2013 6:13:00 PM
Connie, congratulations in Gail's "A Soul Awakened" contest.. take care~ LINDA
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 4:39:00 PM
Thank you for the congratulations. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 10:39:00 AM
Connie, congrats on your big win here...EXCELLENT!!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/30/2013 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Caleb for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/29/2013 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on a gem. J
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/30/2013 12:22:00 PM
Jennifer thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/28/2013 1:39:00 PM
congrats on a great win Connie......
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/28/2013 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Joseph for stopping my and congratulating me. Much appreciates. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/28/2013 11:35:00 AM
Congrats on your grand win~A.O
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/28/2013 12:42:00 PM
Thank you for the congrats A.O. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/28/2013 7:23:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/28/2013 12:46:00 PM
Thank you Debbie for your Congrad's. it means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/28/2013 6:11:00 AM
Congratulations Connie...awesome win
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/28/2013 12:48:00 PM
Thank you Donna for your congratulation. Much appreciated. I hope you had a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/27/2013 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome first placement win, Connie. Good one. :)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/28/2013 12:49:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulations Delysia. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/27/2013 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations Connie, a very intriguing dream, it lets us think of our souls what would happen later on. Nicely written. Love Terry xo
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Date: 4/27/2013 12:52:00 PM
Congrats... GL
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Date: 4/26/2013 1:01:00 AM
I've often wondered that myself? Great write,Connie...I will read more when time permits. :o) And thank you for the kind comments on my poem.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/26/2013 5:08:00 PM
Dan thank you for stopping by and for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/22/2013 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful Connie......good luck....
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/23/2013 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Donna for your comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/21/2013 10:16:00 PM
Hi Connie, This is a beautifully written poem for the contest and a great question to end with??? best of luck. : )
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/23/2013 12:25:00 PM
Bernard thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/21/2013 3:22:00 PM
An enthralling piece. Ah, the emotional words that are striving for an answer from either the obvious or not so obvious. Great job!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/23/2013 12:26:00 PM
Drake thank you for commenting on A Soul Awakened. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/21/2013 3:13:00 PM
This is a truly wonderful take on the contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and delightful poem this afternoon! You have portrayed the dream world quite well, and I feel like I've dreamed something similar to this in the past, especially the electric blue aura...that stood out a lot within your piece! What a special poem, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/23/2013 12:29:00 PM
I happy you enjoyed reading, A Soul Awakened. Thank you for stopping by an leaving a comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

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