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A Soul Awakened

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A Soul Awakened

As I fall asleep, I exit one world only to enter another.
I dream each night of a man I never really see.
Within a crowd of faceless people, I know he's not too far.
What seems like a game of hide and seek, we finally do embrace.
It's an unexplainable feeling that we've met in our past life.
Even though his face isn't clear, he illuminates of his love.
I'm captured by his electric blue aura overriding my own.
It feels like two souls have met and has become as one.
As quickly as we embraced, we've parted in my dreams.
My soul has awakened within the light of dawn, wondering...

Can dream souls ever meet in their waking state,
Or only within realities of their dreams?


03/18/2013

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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Very good write I really enjoyed this! - Edward

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 6/5/2013 6:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Edward thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/2/2013 2:42:00 PM
    this one is fascinating!!! Glad I took the time to read this particular winners list. I Have not seen you in a while and I'm glad to see this poem at first place. Congratulations.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/2/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your congratulation. Still recovering from my surgeries. Sometimes I get behind in reading and commenting on PS poets. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Connie, congratulations in Gail's "A Soul Awakened" contest.. take care~ LINDA

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 5/2/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the congratulations. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/30/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Connie, congrats on your big win here...EXCELLENT!!!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/30/2013 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Caleb for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:47:00 AM
    Congrats on a gem. J

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/30/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jennifer thank you for the congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 1:39:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Connie......

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/28/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Joseph for stopping my and congratulating me. Much appreciates. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Congrats on your grand win~A.O

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/28/2013 12:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the congrats A.O. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:23:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/28/2013 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie for your Congrad's. it means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 7:00:00 AM
    Super write congrats on your big win xxx

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/28/2013 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Mystic thank you for your congratulations. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 6:11:00 AM
    Congratulations Connie...awesome win

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/28/2013 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna for your congratulation. Much appreciated. I hope you had a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on your awesome first placement win, Connie. Good one. :)

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/28/2013 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your congratulations Delysia. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/27/2013 1:03:00 PM
    Congratulations Connie, a very intriguing dream, it lets us think of our souls what would happen later on. Nicely written. Love Terry xo

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 12:52:00 PM
    Congrats... GL

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 1:01:00 AM
    I've often wondered that myself? Great write,Connie...I will read more when time permits. :o) And thank you for the kind comments on my poem.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/26/2013 5:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dan thank you for stopping by and for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Wonderful Connie......good luck....

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/23/2013 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Donna for your comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:16:00 PM
    Hi Connie, This is a beautifully written poem for the contest and a great question to end with??? best of luck. : )

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/23/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bernard thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:22:00 PM
    An enthralling piece. Ah, the emotional words that are striving for an answer from either the obvious or not so obvious. Great job!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/23/2013 12:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Drake thank you for commenting on A Soul Awakened. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:13:00 PM
    This is a truly wonderful take on the contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and delightful poem this afternoon! You have portrayed the dream world quite well, and I feel like I've dreamed something similar to this in the past, especially the electric blue aura...that stood out a lot within your piece! What a special poem, Great Work!!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve
    Date: 4/23/2013 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I happy you enjoyed reading, A Soul Awakened. Thank you for stopping by an leaving a comment. Warm Smiles, Connie