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A Solider Ambition

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A Solider Ambition

The sight of blood, savage limbs, 
Perpendicular glossary to sky, 
Why so symbolic could it be, so divine? 

Melting skulls, haste tongues, 
Humble severed from commands, 
Is it a war zone at its end, or something like slim disease to propose? 

A wise man once said, 
That the term Love, Should never be thrown around if; 
You can never feel or distort from it.

My question to the wise man, 
When will war end, 
But I never got to propose such a question.

Young brother young brother I see we are close to cross that mountain, 
No matter your age origin or color, or creed. 
I consider you my young brothers.

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  1. Date: 3/4/2014 6:55:00 PM
    A Warrior's stage, a soldier's saga, a man's rib cage. Admirable Art soldier! Xool style as well. J.A.B.

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    Date: 3/4/2014 7:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the comment I must read some of your poems some day we seem to be on the same vibe... god bless
  1. Date: 10/14/2013 1:27:00 PM
    The war will end my friend when the battles within our hearts cease! Terrible pictures but beautiful expressions, Louis! Thank you!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Meaningful querries you put in this with emotions, Louis