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A Slippery Day

Winter descended upon the prairie plain Pelting the ground with freezing rain Nipping, biting this cold morning air Thin layers of ice coated everywhere You get out on the road but don't step on the brake That would be your biggest mistake For it would make you slide and spin This would start your heart pump'in within The accidents, fender benders take there toll Some cars or even semi's can roll The roads become a treacherous place You crawl like a turtle at a snails pace You dread having to go out that day Driving is dangerous they say you get behind the wheel and pray No one will back end you along the way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/15/2013 4:50:00 PM
phyllis, don't forget a Whisper on the Wind ,if you were wondering what poem s of yours I had faved!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2011 12:47:00 AM
oh, YES YES< I know this feeling and I hate it, gosh, you did really well showing the dread of the slippery day, Phyllis. Great poem. I am loving page 3 of your poems. Sometimes I can find ones of yours there that I've never seen before!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 3:49:00 PM
Your poem reminding me of living and driving in Michigan and at rare times spinning on the ice. You invoke the mental imagery so well of Mother Nature's power over us on the road. yet, so boldly some go out on these fateful dreadful days, Take Care and thank you for your much welcome comments on my poetry. Love, Susan
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Date: 3/23/2010 8:33:00 PM
good write here,especially where i'm from,thanks!
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Date: 2/4/2010 1:55:00 PM
LOL great writing here and you've told it just like it really is. Out here we've had nothing but rain for 2 weeks but I did spend a couple of years in Ohio and know about that ice/snow driving ... I don't miss it at all ... smile .. I don't think I have you on my birthday calendar Ms. Phyllis ... what is your day/month?
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Date: 1/30/2010 9:12:00 AM
yeah. this is it. your growing and i can tell. your getting something from a spirit because you want it. and your getting it. very very good. but keep that weather up there. John Henry Loving III i have to put this in my favs.
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Date: 1/30/2010 8:29:00 AM
Very good write for the day in so many places. Be careful if you go out. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:45:00 PM
Wow...been there done that...Very descriptive...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/18/2010 8:30:00 AM
Excellent rhyme Phyllis... WOW, first poem read is a fav......Good job, keep em comin'......:JP]
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