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A Shout Into the Void

Upon the arc rises familiar visage of tenebrous dawn As birdsongs protest, yet another day gone wrong, In anguish of emptiness thrashing~ stygian, forlorn, Screaming relentlessly of despondent, indignant void Blasting his emotions, clasped in poignant thoughts. Nothingness was the theme of his darkened night That brazenly shrouded luminance of starlit skies, As the waxing moon turned pallid, refusing to shine And benevolence of Venus dolefully uttered a sigh When dreams, too, acceded to nightmares’ assault. Life has been a long journey, trekking hills of misery In hollow pursuit of hope, always despaired trying~ Every forward step of progress unresponsive, lacking To rescue him from oblivion, from gravity of abyss, Where silence echoes fear, warning there is no exit. He knows intimately, she too feels dread of anxiety: Of ocean-storms unseasonably rushing summer heat, Parching her delicate notions of blossoming spring, Of harsh winters encroaching on her autumns fiercely; Yet, she stands steadfastly, defying the curse of grief. Prodding goodwill of divinity she tolls bells of harmony Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings Clamoring for a day to brighten halo of their morning, Demanding relief; with her clenched fists at the ready… Forever, if it takes that long, to alter path of destiny. December 20, 2021 Poem of the day on December 22, 2021 Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 27 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title: A Shout Into The Void

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Date: 1/17/2022 11:20:00 AM
How do you (& others like Robert Lindley, Besma Dziri, et al) string so many great words together?! Kudos
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Date: 1/12/2022 4:45:00 AM
Back with congrats Vijay on the top spot, well deserved too. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Much appreciate.
Date: 1/11/2022 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on having this beauty at the top of the best new poems list Vijay! Kudos! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/13/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for your return visit Connie. Much appreciate.
Date: 1/11/2022 3:26:00 PM
OH wow, beautifully done and Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/13/2022 9:22:00 AM
Thank you MLK.
Date: 1/10/2022 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations for #1 on the best new poem list Vijay :)
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Date: 1/10/2022 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Much appreciate. Haven't seen a new poem from you for a while.
Date: 1/7/2022 10:04:00 AM
Vijay dear friend, my husband and I have been away for two weeks - i thought of you and the wonderful descriptions you write describing landscapes with such talent, we visited the awesome, amazing Midlands of Kwazulu Natal, and for three quarters of our stay were shrouded in mist, heavenly! Congratulations for your POTD on the 22nd of December, a truly remarkable poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2022 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Sounds like you had a great time being away on vacation.
Date: 1/5/2022 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful amazing
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Date: 1/5/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Arjun.
Date: 1/1/2022 4:10:00 PM
I get a chill when I began to read this, then it builds to something hopeful; beautifully depicted imagery.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2022 6:03:00 PM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate.
Date: 1/1/2022 12:06:00 PM
"Prodding goodwill of divinity she tolls bells of harmony Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings" ~Beautiful. Like a bridge of hope, you lifted my heart. You wrote a masterpiece in this amazing and awesome poem! Happy new year Vijay <3
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Date: 1/1/2022 6:02:00 PM
Your comments are very generous and eloquent, BJ. Thank you for visiting --much appreciate.
Date: 1/1/2022 9:51:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Vijay:-) Your poem is spectacular, no wonder it won POTD! Well-deserved, for sure.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2022 6:01:00 PM
So very kind of you, Edward. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks for sponsoring contests with superb themes.
Date: 12/31/2021 9:43:00 PM
Great narration and beautiful work. "Life has been a long journey, trekking hills of misery In hollow pursuit of hope" - The whole poem is beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2022 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 12/28/2021 11:10:00 AM
Out of darkness comes "bells of harmony," "halo of morning," "to alter path of destiny." Out of darkness comes a demand for hope to spread its wings over "harsh winters," "ocean storms" and "curse of grief." Wonderfully written take on the theme Vijay! It was tough and challenging theme ! Congratulations on your POTD! Sending you all the blessings of the Christmas season.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/29/2021 7:24:00 AM
So very kind of you Sam. Many thanks for taking the time to write a detailed, insightful feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments. My very best to you for the new year, Sam.
Date: 12/25/2021 10:10:00 PM
Love how you took this challenge and I see you also got a POTD for this one . Big congrats for that
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Date: 12/29/2021 7:22:00 AM
Much appreciate, Andrea. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 12/25/2021 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD,
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Date: 12/29/2021 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Kim. Much appreciate.
Date: 12/23/2021 4:11:00 PM
So descriptive and filled with so much feeling! Fantastic writing. Congratulations on your POTD honor :) -ps
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/25/2021 4:06:00 PM
Thank you PS--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 12/23/2021 5:20:00 AM
Wonderful write, Vijay. Your pen always so bright and golden. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Happy & Healthy New Year. All the best, Charlie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 9:13:00 AM
So very kind of you Charlie. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks. My best to you for the holidays and the new year.
Date: 12/22/2021 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay ~ Enjoyed
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Debra--much appreciate.
Date: 12/22/2021 6:27:00 PM
Your words shine through the darkness. Echo through the void. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:26:00 AM
Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate. My very best to you for the holidays and the new year.
Date: 12/22/2021 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay. An amazing poem with a poignant thought-provoking theme! Your images always take my breath away! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:25:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mala. Many thanks.
Date: 12/22/2021 5:33:00 PM
Vijay, always a delight to enjoy your poetic mastery of the emotional journey called life... melancholy with a hopeful conclusion, I particularly enjoyed 'Giving voice and meaning to life’s reassuring feelings'. Congrats on your POTD acknowledgement, my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:24:00 AM
So very kind of you John. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 12/22/2021 5:22:00 PM
WoW! Vijay, What an outstanding entry for the contest theme. I found it to be intriguing and thought-provoking. Congrats in advance. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved poem of the day. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:23:00 AM
Glad you stopped by my friend with your kind thoughts. Much appreciate Alexis. Many thanks.
Date: 12/22/2021 4:52:00 PM
Vijay, Congratulations on POTD. Fantastic~ Warren
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Date: 12/23/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Warren. Much appreciate.
Date: 12/22/2021 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on having this amazing poem honored for POTD Vijay. Your talent is astounding. Blessings for a wonderful Christmas/holiday. xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:22:00 AM
Thank you Connie. Much appreciate your kind remarks. My best to you for the holidays and new year.
Date: 12/22/2021 1:37:00 PM
Vijay, wonderful poem and congratulations on your POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:21:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Constance. Many thanks.
Date: 12/22/2021 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on this poetic melody that was honored as POTD, my dearest friend, Vijay! Merry Christmas!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/23/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend. Best wishes to you and your family for the festive season and new year. My thoughts reach out to you as you carry the burdens of family and friends who are going through tough times.
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