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A season's dance

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composed by: Giorgio
contest: A season's dance
sponsor: Gail

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A season's dance


What art thou, splendid maid, inclined to verse?
Upon the skies, the stars thy words rehearse.

The darkness cometh with a Fall's request
while in thy kitchen, Gail, should do your best;

for spicy tastes the famous bard now begs
but you regaled his pleas with two boiled eggs.

The Eros Iamb feet, sung by the sire,
repeated are by stray cats' alto choire.

while resonant, of music flaws he shuns,
cats meow at him, from two deep tin trash cans.

Your bucket-full of water then, is thrown,
to fall upon his head and new iphone.

Enchanted so, thou callest the fine bard,
to dance with you Fall's jazzy avant-garde.

© G. V., 10-03-2013
(Iambic pentameter)

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  1. Date: 10/17/2014 9:44:00 PM
    CAme back here to see how you did an epigram. This was a delightful read. I found it humorous putting the iphone into the mix because it had a classic feeling and then you added the modern in. I see it won something. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 6:10:00 PM
    Fabulous write deary friend Giorgio... thank you for sharing your amazing tallent :) much love and peace <3 Sk

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    Date: 1/29/2014 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the same reasons, Sukmawati. :) G.
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poem, Giorgio! Made me laugh....very cleaver poem and many congrats on your win in Gail's contest! Julie :-)

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:15:00 PM
    Giorgio, lovely win.. LOVE --SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:05:00 PM
    Hello Giorgio, a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 1:02:00 PM
    Splendid and wonderfully unique!! Congrats on your well-deserved win, Giorgio! Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:25:00 AM
    BAM! I'm blown away by your IP. Love the subtle references Grats!

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 3:31:00 PM
    yes, yes.. a fine wordsmith you are, G... congrats on your high win.. and more to come!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Wow, stunning lines and images. The poor bard yearning to dance with the beauty. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:24:00 AM
    Wow!Beautifully written...Lovely piece,Giorgio...You have become a MASTER of meter poetry..Kudos to you,great poet...Congrats on your superb WIN....

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:51:00 AM
    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 7:50:00 PM
    I love the novel approach, and sense of uniquely your own!! Congratulations.....well deserved!

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 4:38:00 PM
    beautifully penned...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:39:00 AM
    Very well written poem here. I enjoyed the read! Cindy

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Very unique and interesting write! :) I enjoyed the journey through this mix of old and new elements. Good luck on contest! :)

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 4:01:00 AM
    Ahhh!! Uniquely creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 11:41:00 PM
    Great combination of fun and imagery.All the best and thank you for passing by my work

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:34:00 PM
    Oh, I really love how you had the juxtaposition of classic elements with the new fangled things such as I phones. COOL!!! Love the ending to this.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:17:00 PM
    A lovely poem Giorgio, love the enchanting imagery and calling of the bard.. romantic at it's best.. good luck in the contest..Linda

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Love the humor, and especially the personal touch !! She will too !!