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A Sand Grain Trapped In Oyster

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A Sand Grain Trapped In Oyster

A sand grain trapped in an oyster

The muse descends from heavens
into thinking sphere ,and sparkles synaptic cluster
Slowly gathers layers of imaginations
Like a fortunate sand grain trapped in deep sea oyster

Sleepless nights,restless days
Nagging,pulsing ,tossing, turning;thoughts get mightier
Emotion whirls,verses sediment
Poetry emerges; the pearls formed dazzle brighter. 

Russel Sivey's contest-Poetry on poetry
19.01.2013
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  1. Date: 1/28/2013 12:29:00 PM
    Nice job. It really captures the imagination.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 10:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Isaiah....
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 6:31:00 PM
    A nice little win. I think I missed this winning poem. this poem reminds me of the Princess and the pea.... both came with dazzling ending... a nice pearl waiting to to rest with comfort... enjoyed...PD

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :-) ...thanks PD
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 3:21:00 PM
    a gem of a write Mehnaz....congrats on your win

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much,Joseph...
  1. Date: 1/27/2013 11:28:00 AM
    I can't believe I missed this one. This is beautiful! Then again that shouldn't be a surprise, I have enjoyed many of your pearls.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    you are kind Richard, thank you for the kind words....
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 4:04:00 PM
    Yep, I've felt them all...and not sure all mine become pearls..but a lovely thought. Congrats on your win !

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for the visit....
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 5:06:00 AM
    Congratz on your fantastic win! They are gorgeous :)

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Yanny....glad you liked it...
  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:50:00 AM
    This is really good Mehnaz, congrats!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Yesha....
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 7:14:00 PM
    congrats :-) SKAT

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you....
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 2:22:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Mehnaz.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you Suzette...
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 1:03:00 PM
    Kuddos on your win, Mehnaz! Ruben.

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ruben...
  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Mehnaz xx

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 1/28/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy...