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A Raging Inferno

Love doesn't need to knock you down Sometimes it's ever so subtle Before you know it you're under it's spell Helplessly trapped in love's bubble No use trying to escape the entrapment It's futile you're under it's spell After long and heightened anticipation Your pulse is racing like hell The absolute extreme best kind of love One that's totally uncontrived The kind that happens when least expected That takes you by complete surprise Excitement as much as you can bear You think you're going insane Can't sleep, can't do normal everyday things Your world has been set aflame Love often starts so innocently at first And grows into a love tornado Passionate love that builds and builds Until it's a raging inferno! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 11/14/2013 1:21:00 AM
Hey Jack, your sounding like the love sick puppy I've become. You bring perfection with every write my friend! Hugs xoxo
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:45:00 PM
Trapped in loves bubble? Now that has ???? Yes one of your best!!!!!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2013 7:12:00 PM
I'm sizzling... don't know what's come over me! LOL Just going to enjoy the ride... ;-) Love ya Donna dear Donna! xoxoxox
Date: 11/12/2013 4:10:00 PM
You sure know your subject matter Jack, excellent poetry enjoyed this...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2013 5:10:00 PM
Well thank you my friend! Those are very kind words Harry! Cheers!!!
Date: 11/12/2013 11:03:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your excellent penned rhyme about love..Awesome topic and presentation..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2013 1:03:00 PM
WOW! Thank you Sara... very kind comments! Big hugs, Jack xox
Date: 11/12/2013 9:55:00 AM
Yeah I agree... Dragon catches you in his little bubble of cutenss... But then he opens his mouth and blows you away... LOL... Gotta love him... But in your fire retardant suit...
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:02:00 AM
I can honestly say my dear Carol, your responses are totally unique! No one else ever talks about THEIR Dragons! xoxoxoxox
Date: 11/12/2013 8:30:00 AM
KENNY!!!!! Kenny! This is absolutely and incredibly awesome!! How did you come up with it? A RAGING INFERNO INDEED! I'm SO SO impressed by you! :) Hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2013 9:35:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! And this rave review is from the TEACH!!! Thank you a whole big bunch for those fantastic words of praise! Coming from you means a whole big bunch! Love, Kenny! xoxoxoxoxxoxox
Date: 11/12/2013 7:23:00 AM
The master has spoken! Mere mortals listen to the voice of the adept! My friend, Jack, how many times for the inferno we pray instead of a serene shore of apathy to find? Didactic and true!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2013 7:33:00 AM
Master??? Not sure about that but thank you for your very kind comments, my good friend! Hope your day is filled with joy and much happiness! Cheers!
Date: 11/12/2013 6:46:00 AM
This is such a beautiful write, my favorite lines has to be, "Your world has been set aflame" and of course, "Until it's a raging inferno!" those both lines are incredible my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful and encouraging poem this morning! What a positive piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2013 7:07:00 AM
You are very kind my friend... thank you!!!

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