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a proud poet

A emotional mess
Building something with words

They past the test
When the impossible occured

They saw the picture
That was painted by God

And try to describe
With majisty and awe

We treasure love
In all of its forms

The pureness of nature
And deceit and scorn

We stand united
By just three words

We the people
Demand to be heard

We shout out treason
From the mountain top

Go barely noticed
And soon forgot

We gave them the reason
And told them the plot

We gave the speech
And then we got shot

I need the world
To hear what I'm saying

Lovers and politicians
They need to stop playing

Copyright © John Loving III

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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 5:10:00 PM
    Wonderful write John, love elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 7:06:00 PM
    We put everything we feel into a poem and try to express our feelings. We want others to hear what we have to say in regards to daily life. Hope you had a wonderful new years. love phyl

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:14:00 AM
    Very interesting and thought provoking write.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:37:00 PM
    Soup mail soon..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:36:00 AM
    Love it all the way through ;}

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 2:54:00 AM
    So clever, wise, deep and beautiful! Simply Perfect!

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 3:47:00 PM
    good messagel fior lovers and politicians john..tnks for joininf ib prayer fir linda

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:33:00 PM
    A work of art John! Very well portrayed :)

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 12:51:00 AM
    brilliant piece! I absolutely loved reading! :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:02:00 AM
    soupmail in a moment. :) Catie

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 6:55:00 PM
    yep, they need to have a poet's soul, JOhn. I enjoyed this one. Yep, Salvation ARmy is a GREAT organization.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 12:43:00 PM
    Got that one correct..Enjoyed reading this one..Great work that you have penned..Yes, I have one dog Chihuahua and Rat Terrier mix..My Rat Terrier died in June of this year from heart failure at age 14 1/2 years..Our son brought this dog to us.It was in the woods behind the his house where someone had put it out.It was estimated age 4 months..It weighed about 4 1/2 lbs..She had a broken tail which we finally had to have docked.She is just perfect for us.Doris' dog stays down here all the time.SK

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    Date: 12/17/2012 12:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Doris' dog is a winner dog and chihuahua mix..I have one cat but had two..Our son's dog Stretch which is a Patterdale killed my favorite cat..Sara
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 12:24:00 PM
    A proud poet ... can also be very vulnerable poet. Many people often put their whole soul in a poem. - Very well written John. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)