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A Poem For You

A POEM FOR YOU Unable am I A poem for you to write my love For The wealth of words mournfully pales Before The treasure of your unrivaled beauty! © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 OCTOBER 2013

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Date: 11/1/2013 9:50:00 AM
How very romantic this is..Manytimes the shortest words says it best..Just beautiful
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:53:00 AM
You my dear, Charmain, certainly know best! How could it be otherwise? Thank you for your visit and comment!
Date: 10/30/2013 4:49:00 PM
i strugled not to find words the other day.
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Date: 10/30/2013 7:21:00 PM
Obvious it is, John!
Date: 10/30/2013 2:25:00 AM
So much in so few words. This is a great write. Thanks for penning one. Friend, JM
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:38:00 AM
My good friend, Joseph, thank you for visiting and for making such a nice comment!
Date: 10/29/2013 11:05:00 PM
Ohhhh...poets painting blushing cheeks on pretty girls..how romantic and beautiful...:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:40:00 AM
Donna, my dear, I am certain poems have been written for you and better poems than this! Thank you!
Date: 10/29/2013 6:57:00 PM
very touching and lovely!
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:41:00 AM
Every sensitive and loving heart, dear Ilene, would find this little poem touching and lovely! Thank you so much!
Date: 10/29/2013 11:08:00 AM
oooh, what a celebration of love's beauty, D... dreamy write so divinely expressed!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:28:00 PM
Fortunately ladies are here to inspire men with their beauty and kindness. They are poetry incarnated! No matter how far they are, they always are close to my heart! Thank you, nette, for your visit and your dreamy comment!
Date: 10/29/2013 11:06:00 AM
At times words just cannot express everything. So well versed like a burst of magic.
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:23:00 PM
Karen, you are magic yourself my dear,as this is your first visit my heart offers to you some of HER beats as a thank you note!
Date: 10/29/2013 7:40:00 AM
- Beautiful, Demetrios !!!! - Yes....WooW !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:06:00 AM
Anne Lise, knowing how sensitive you are I easily could translate your WooW to volumes of words! Thank you!
Date: 10/29/2013 6:25:00 AM
Your philosophy rings true within this write my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a beautifully loving poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:03:00 AM
My good friend,Russell, I think you would agree that no-word, no matter how strong in meaning is, can express our love and admiration to the one lady we adore! Thank you!
Date: 10/29/2013 2:48:00 AM
Beautiful..beauty etched in every line.....a 7 for I cannot give more....filakia
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:00:00 AM
Such a beautiful comment from such a lovely lady how could I ever refuse? Thank you!

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