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A Placid Lake

A PLACID LAKE Lord, My whole being a placid Lake, Expecting Thy holy visage to be Reflected upon For Its waters to be sanctified And I-once more-to be born! © Demetrios Trifiatis 15 JUNE 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2013 10:02:00 AM

this is making me think of a baptism, enjoyed your write, ~always, Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 6/19/2013 8:30:00 PM

Once more to be born...such a wonderful thing and poem Demetrios..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2013 6:03:00 AM

- Always enjoyable to read your beautiful poems, Demetrios. - This is a golden gem! - Have a great new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/16/2013 7:06:00 AM

A worthwhile search indeed. Beautiful words.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/15/2013 11:42:00 PM

Excellent. Truly nice wording. Tfs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/16/2013 1:22:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend for taking the time to comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/15/2013 1:40:00 AM

Truly beautiful...and to my favorites...again!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/15/2013 10:05:00 AM

How gracious of you my dear! Thank you!

Elai Cee

Date: 6/15/2013 12:46:00 AM

Wow! I love this the effect of water to be born again. may u have a wonderful and blessed day!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/15/2013 10:06:00 AM

Thank you Elai, so kind of you to visit!