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A Piece of Bass

You shoot me a five cent smile Sitting on your million dollar ass Forgive me if I seem hostile Your bait didn't hook this Bass I've played the game of two I'll just stand in my barrel of booze If it's all the same to you I have a vat of Vodka to infuse

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2014 11:05:00 AM

haha. this sounds more like frat boys instead of a high class bar, and it feels like two guys having a showdown on who can drink the most. did i get that right? It's a very fun read!! another 7!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2014 11:03:00 AM

I keep forgetting where I left off as I try to finish my goal of having read all your poems. but here is one that I never got to! so let me read this one now and just say happy christmas in case I don't get on here later tonight!!

Robin Davis

Date: 9/9/2014 6:51:00 AM

Maurice A poem that gets right to the point with a little humor added. Don't take the bait if it means getting trapped. Thank you for the nice comment on my My Nicknames poem.

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/31/2014 4:29:00 PM

Do we have a theme going on here?? Definitely a wise, or well learned man your Leon !!! Perhaps a few too many bitten hooks?? lol Good rhymes and smooth read !!! Bottoms up... the glass, Leon, the glass !!!!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 8:36:00 PM

yes Leon is not is the best of moods. thank you again for visiting.

Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2014 10:51:00 AM

Maurice, this made me smile, wonderful write ~~

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 8:37:00 PM

you are very kind. thank you.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/31/2014 10:43:00 AM

What a witty write, Maurice! I don't blame Leon for not taking the bait. People who are unlucky in love sometimes turn to booze or other ways to alleviate their depression. I'm just used to going it alone. (No, the Halloween poem wasn't meant to be shaped like an owl.) Love and blessings, Carolyn

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 8:39:00 PM

thank you. love your comment.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/31/2014 8:58:00 AM

Oh dear vodka....why did you hit me in the head....Im laying her wishing I were dead...naked and alone in this spinning bed

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 8:41:00 PM

post it please. it's a good poem. thanks Tim.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/31/2014 6:32:00 AM

Interesting poem, like this straight to the point...

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 8:44:00 PM

thank you for dropping by.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/31/2014 4:08:00 AM

Bonjour mon ami, Maurice! You seem to be a man of much experience with the ladies. Certainly your writing shows a great wealth of it! Beautiful and dynamic writing that doesn't beat about the bush. Merci pour ta visite!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 8:48:00 PM

merci beaucoup pour ta visite tu es tres gentille.