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As children we revelled in nature’s playground Lying in cool grass watching clouds sail by Sharing with playmates ‘treasures’ we’d found Caterpillars, beetles - a dead dragonfly Jars of black tadpoles sprouting from frogs’ eggs Gathered near cattails - a muddy pond’s edge Safe in a matchbox - a daddy longlegs We pine for these days as memory we dredge So keep them in mind - those halcyon days Whenever our cares prove too much to bear When life becomes an impossible maze Try to escape to a peaceful ‘somewhere’ Remember the lessons from nature you drew They’ll always there to help pull you through

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Date: 11/14/2022 10:36:00 PM
what I can comment without WOW; just great; I enjoyed greatly the hybrid sonnet
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/16/2022 3:40:00 AM
Hi Mahtab: I am enjoying trying new forms I appreciate you your very nice comment. SuZ
Date: 7/24/2022 3:24:00 AM
Such wonderful memories escaping into the world of nature to find peace and traquility you have expressed Suzanne. Love how you wrote this... Enjoy the rest of your weekend and God bless you...
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Date: 7/17/2022 4:30:00 PM
So true, SuZ, thanks for the memories. Nature is a true friend, always there to meet one's needs. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/3/2022 11:46:00 PM
We pine for those days. I can see looking back. The tad poles remind me of living in the country. Very beautiful this reminder you have written.
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Date: 5/21/2022 10:09:00 AM
i love the images within these lines...and i have many fresh within....remember the explorations of ditches, pools of trapped minnows, crayfish, dragonflies....you have helped evoke them....love the essence within this poem...i breathe in Mindfulness and the ataraxia begins...the first taste of eternity
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 5/31/2022 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Timray: I have been fighting an ice infection with not much time On the internet. I appreciate your thoughtfulness comments.
Date: 4/14/2022 6:19:00 PM
Your evocative images of freshly seen life roused many memories, long neglected in the mind. Thank you for this mental nudge, Suzanne.
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Date: 4/11/2022 1:38:00 AM
I sense SuZ, its a going back to basics, once left some forget, while poets seem to grow on from it. This is how i'm feeling as i read this your wonderful poem.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/11/2022 1:24:00 PM
Hi Harry: In a way I am playing a game with my Muse. I pick four words from a list and select a form from the types of poetry link and go from there. I call it poem sketching but I have written about 8 poems lately when I was down to almost no new poems. Fun. Best, SuZ
Date: 4/8/2022 8:19:00 AM
Memories keep the child within us alive, dearest Suzanne! Much enjoyed! Blessings.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/10/2022 4:25:00 AM
Dear Demetrios: Yes! our precious inner child. Our keeper of joy. Thanks for your always thoughtful comments. Best always, SuZ
Date: 4/7/2022 12:59:00 PM
Lovely penning Suzanne with nice rhyme and flow bringing out lovely memories. Take care always, Gordon
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/10/2022 4:22:00 AM
Hi Gordon. Please forgive my late response to your ever welcome comments. I have had an eye infection which is now resolving. Best, SuZ
Date: 4/6/2022 11:41:00 AM
Daddy Longlegs? You ought to get a prize for that! Aloha!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/10/2022 4:20:00 AM
Ha ha Rico and thanks. I will see if there is a Contest category I can slip it into. Aloha. SuZ
Date: 4/6/2022 11:08:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem invoking childhood memories, SuZ. Great images to reflect on. I like the poem and your rhymes.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/10/2022 4:18:00 AM
Dear Vijay. How the week quickly flies. I have had an eye infection so hence my late response to your ever welcome comments. Best, SuZ
Date: 4/6/2022 10:19:00 AM
I like this very much, SuzD. It brought back many childhood memories. I, too, remember catching tadpoles and keeping a box full of "treasures."
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/10/2022 4:17:00 AM
Thanks Milton….As you can guess I had an older brother who led me astray into the wonderful world of insects and amphibians. Best, SuZ

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