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A Party Under the Floor

Here's a subject Haven't written bout before Whad'ya think's living Under the floor Lately heard noises Like a party or such Like people laughing And drinking and stuff A vivid imagination Been accused of having Maybe the medication Is why it's happening Sure like to join 'em Wherever they are Got beer in the fridge And snacks on the bar Are you maybe thinking I'm losing my grip Then you'd all be wrong This dude's real hip A vivid imagination Is all that it is Making life interesting There's nothing amiss So relax everybody Just having some fun Don't mean no harm I love everyone MMMMUUUAAAAAAA! (That's a big smackeroonie!) © Jack Ellison 2013

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Poet Tacito

Date: 9/3/2013 10:51:00 AM

Ha! Yes! Your playfulness continues to know NO bounds! Awesome! =D

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/3/2013 10:55:00 AM

I'm beginning to wonder if I should have this trait looked into! There's a time to be serious... no there ain't! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/2/2013 10:24:00 AM

We have Trolls under our floor (in the basement). They can be quite noisy at times. I swear they snore louder that I do. And that's hard to beat! .. P.S. I stopped Dragons hunger strike. I took out a bottle of barbecue sauce... Works every time, but he's still miffed. The penguins said I could wait on their story for a few days. Aren't they sweet. Are you listening Dragon? Hey! I don't want barbecue sauce on my new sneakers! ... What do you mean hurry up? These things take time . Silly Dragon!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/2/2013 11:19:00 AM

Holy crap... this man is strange! No wonder we get along so well! LOL Big smackeroonies! xoxxo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/2/2013 3:36:00 AM

A BIG smackeroonie to you too my friend! You are a ray of joy in this joyless world! Thank you for visiting!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/2/2013 5:04:00 AM

"A joyless world" well said. Best wishes to you, Demetrio and stay safe!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/2/2013 1:04:00 AM

Ha ha! This was so much fun Javk.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/2/2013 5:03:00 AM

Thanks for the visit, Mr. West Coast Richard! Glad you had some fun reading my silliness! Cheers from the east!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/1/2013 8:40:00 PM

Keep that funny side rolling out. Fine write.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/2/2013 5:02:00 AM

You are so kind... thank you my dear friend!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/1/2013 2:32:00 PM

RIGHT BACK AT YA!!!! Keep that imagination in check or you'll get in trouble, my dear Kenny!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/2/2013 5:00:00 AM

Trouble is my middle name, Miss Boop! LOL Love ya dearest lady! Stay safe.... big warm hugs xoxoxox

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2013 8:34:00 AM

Very light poem with inner humour

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2013 8:37:00 AM

We must laugh every day... happy to have helped! Thanks for the visit my friend!