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A New Love Valve For My Heart

I need a new valve In this little heart of mine I need a sturdy one That only lets enough love out As the amount of love coming in The valve I have is faulty For even when love comes in a trickle It lets out a strong surge of love And my little heart gets depleted Of life giving love Leading to.... Heart attacks! Yes, I suffer heart attacks That are painful and frightening The after effects of discomfort Last such a LONG time And I wonder…. Will the next one be fatal? I need a new valve I MUST get a new valve Right away! Before it’s too late! Or perhaps….. Perhaps… I need a new heart?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 9:01:00 PM

what a great poem, dearie!! Congrats on it being featured!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/6/2015 1:17:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea...Glad you dropped by. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 4:13:00 PM

JADE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/6/2015 1:31:00 AM

Hey PD. Been thinking of you. Thanks for dropping by. This was a simple little write I did. Interesting that this one should be chosen! :) Hope all is well. Happy Easter...Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/14/2013 4:53:00 AM

I think your Heart is intact my dear, the thing about love is the more we give the more human we become. It certainly has added to your poetic voice.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/14/2013 12:25:00 PM

Richard....this means a lot to me. It is hard to feel so deeply. Sometimes I wish I could be more superficial...but...that's just not me! Thanks for the post! :)

Rollo West

Date: 1/9/2013 2:03:00 PM

Hi Eileen, your write is outstanding, but the reason you wrote it is not. I truly hope everything works out for you. Rollo

Kasim Ishmael

Date: 1/8/2013 9:20:00 AM

very nice ,love hurts like hell and the pain last forever i live it everyday

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/8/2013 2:14:00 PM

Kasim...I'm sorry for the pain you are going through. Hope there is an end in sight..if not, just remember, "It's better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all!" Thanks for the post! :)

Kash Poet

Date: 1/8/2013 6:12:00 AM

Same here!I also need the same.Beautiful poem.I think in the first line the word should be VALVE instead of VALUE.Enjoyed your poem.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/8/2013 6:14:00 AM

Kash....thanks ever so much for the correction! I so appreciate it! May God strengthen your heart as well! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/8/2013 4:56:00 AM

I have been through this tyrannical process many times. The heart has her own rules: Ready to sell a piece of the soul to get her wish. Beautiful, real, human and marvelously deployed! Thank you.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/8/2013 5:59:00 AM

Demetrios...you are so kind! Thanks for the lovely post. It is good to know that others have gone through the same predicament. The heart knows no reason. What to do? Hope you have a good day! Hugs!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/7/2013 2:01:00 AM

Lovely poem!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2013 3:32:00 PM

Thanks, Vesna! Lovely to hear from you! :)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 1/6/2013 7:43:00 PM

What an angel you are. I pray that God above will give you no more pain than you can bear. I also pray that he fills your heart with endless joy and love for all time. Soup mail.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2013 3:32:00 PM

Jon, you are a dear and I'm so encouraged by your posts! Thank you! Soup Mail right back at ya! In fact, I'm such a novice at this that I think I sent you two messages! Happy reading! God bless! :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/6/2013 1:23:00 PM

If you get it from the Source, you won't be depleted, dear Eileen. He is our unlimited supplier :) Great write!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/7/2013 3:20:00 PM

Toquyen...I believe in the SOURCE OF LOVE! He has always been there for me, but sometimes we need to experience these things to be reminded of His unconditional love! :) Thanks for the post!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2013 5:39:00 AM

You have a heart of gold, Eileen. - A good poem, my friend. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/6/2013 6:04:00 AM

Thanks, Anne Lise. You are a dear! <3 :)