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A Morning Walk

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A Morning Walk

 
Proud the light and falling dew On blossoming fields in airy May Those rosy buds the bees pursue Through the warm and fulgent ray. They flutter by from eye to eye Feeding ears with a common song As happy shone the autumn sky With the clouds that drifts along. As sauntered I, by the river's brink When gladsome Swans would glide There bent I, for the evening drink By the crystal stream expanding wide. A lonely touch wonders sly across On my damp skin and dewy hair Was hues that sail its noonday course As the night time cold approaches near. On this ridged road, a slippery path The sweet breeze had plucked a quill When Blue Jays young, had swift depart To scan the silhouette upon the hill.

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  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:08:00 PM
    Excellent write my friend. The next time your going for a walk pack up a picnic basket, i'm coming along. Don't worry, i'll carry the basket,....on second thoughts, if we want to eat, you carry the basket. You do paint such beautiful pictures my friend. We can almost taste and touch within the scene. May your pen ever be filled with such light my friend. Catch you later....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 8:41:00 AM
    your images are vivid and beautiful...I enjoyed this walk with you..

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 2:40:00 AM
    Absolutely stunning work!

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 6:21:00 PM
    dear M.M lovely my friend you took me with you on your walk Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 9:31:00 AM
    Brilliant poem, Mustapha; the first two stanzas especially. My only suggestion would be to omit "a" from "with a common song" and also to omit "the" from "with the clouds". I think it would make it a tad more fluid, but even left as is, it's a beautiful and brilliant poem; enjoyed it immensely :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 2:00:00 PM
    You described the look of early morning, perfectly! Excellent imagery in this poem. I just love the flow of your rhymes with your words! Keep these fantastic works coming, my friend!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:59:00 PM
    This poem like all your others is just beautiful, I wish some of it would rub off on me Lol. thanks for the read Mustapha....Peter

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Beautiful and serene, my friend. Lovely write

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 10:02:00 AM
    your writes are so colorful to the mind with beauty, enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda

  1. Date: 8/31/2013 6:31:00 AM
    This piece transported me to your peaceful setting.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 9/1/2013 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard for your kind review. Much appreciated.
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 4:49:00 AM
    Such a fine poem full of wonderful imagery.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/31/2013 5:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sandra for your kind feedback.
  1. Date: 8/31/2013 3:45:00 AM
    ANOTHER EXCELLENT PIECE MY OLD FRIEND HAVE A BLESSED BEAUTIFUL DAY

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 8/31/2013 4:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You have a blessed day also Liam. Its 6 am over here and the weather looks fine. So far so good, keeping my fingers crossed. Thanks!