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A Melancholic

A disease intrinsic and quiet infesting a soul which submissively accepts presenting self inflicting suffering to the body which covers it. The record keeper of happiness loses his work from gross idleness. The fuel of laughter even with words and lines so sophisticated making the inanimate change state cannot drag a drop of smile from this soul so wary and pressed. Company is replaced with tears and all feelings, compressed into one. Cracking an egg shell from its edges is simpler than distinguishing its moods. What a soul! Why were you created when nature was sad? Why were you formed when the gods were asleep? Why were you blessed when the daughters of cheerfulness were drunk? The cloth of loneliness and the perfume of silence, you need to unwear no matter how hard. This will put on the light of proper existence for you to bathe in the spring of Life's beautiful varieties!

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Date: 2/20/2016 9:17:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. You have a way with words. Love your use of imagery. Anxious to read more of your work. God bless you and keep you.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/13/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Valerie
Date: 4/1/2014 3:17:00 PM
Oh, you've such a deep soul, Funom. "The cloth of loneliness, the perfume of silence", you blow me away with you metaphors and imagery! One may never totally understand depression, maybe multiple causes or it might be in the genes. One of my dearest friends has this. Keep well..Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/2/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Michelle Mac... Your comment just placed a long smile on my face. I really appreciate your kind and encouraging words... Cheers!
Date: 3/29/2014 9:59:00 AM
Another absolutely wonderful write on this poem. Loneliness and depression need to be washed away so only light will shine into their eyes. love phyl
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/29/2014 12:43:00 PM
Thanks a lot Phyllis
Date: 3/28/2014 12:25:00 PM
I am amazed no one has commented. This is beyond exceptional. I am adding this to my favorites!
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/28/2014 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard

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